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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Sat Jan 20, 2007 11:53 pm

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dil be-niyaz itnaa hei faSl-e-bahaar se

"kaaTooN maiN sarvo ko jo baRhe qadd-e-yaar se".

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.(gireh ka miSraA)

jawab!

mire kareem! jo teree raZ^ magar is bar

baras guzar gae shakhoN ko be camar rehte!
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Post by Abdullah Nazir » Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:37 am




Agar himmat nah hou tou naakhudaa kuch kar nahiN saktaa

nah maujeN saath deti heiN nah saaHil saath detaa hei


Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.



Nazir.

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Sun Jan 21, 2007 6:26 pm

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Agar himmat nah hou tou naakhudaa kuch kar nahiN saktaa

nah maujeN saath deti heiN nah saaHil saath detaa hei

Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.

jawab!

Dubte Dubte kashtee ko uch~ala de dooN

maiN naheeN koee to saHil peh utar jae ga!

(Faraz)
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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:39 pm

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Agar himmat nah hou tou naakhudaa kuch kar nahiN saktaa

nah maujeN saath deti heiN nah saaHil saath detaa hei

Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.

jawab!

Dubte Dubte kashtee ko uch~ala de dooN

maiN naheeN koee to saHil peh utar jae ga!

(Faraz)

dusra jawab!

bh~arosah na khuda ka ch~ooR! le naam-e-khuda "kaocar"

qayamat khez haiN ulfat ke dh~are ham nah kehte th~e!
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Post by Abdullah Nazir » Mon Jan 22, 2007 4:05 am




daaman-e-saaHil peh yeh kis ne kahaa soutee hei mauj
sar paTakti hei musalsal, raat din routee hei mauj
ghaflat-e-mallaaH le Doobe nah kashti ko kaheeN
joush meiN aati hei jab, ToofaaN bhee houtee hei mauj
girya-e-shabnam ko de deti hei ik moutee kaa roop
beej yeh kaisaa Sadaf ke qalb meiN boutee hei mauj
mubtalaay-e-yaas houte heiN kayi gumkardah raah
boujh kaandhaoN per safeenaoN kaa magar Dhouti hei mauj
kitne Nazir apnaasar Takraake in se mar miTe
ab siy'ah dil pattharaoN ke daagh kiyuN dhouti hei mauj?.


Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.



Nazir.

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Mon Jan 22, 2007 4:22 pm

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daaman-e-saaHil peh yeh kis ne kahaa soutee hei mauj
sar paTakti hei musalsal, raat din routee hei mauj
ghaflat-e-mallaaH le Doobe nah kashti ko kaheeN
joush meiN aati hei jab, ToofaaN bhee houtee hei mauj
girya-e-shabnam ko de deti hei ik moutee kaa roop
beej yeh kaisaa Sadaf ke qalb meiN boutee hei mauj
mubtalaay-e-yaas houte heiN kayi gumkardah raah
boujh kaandhaoN per safeenaoN kaa magar Dhouti hei mauj
kitne Nazir apnaa sar Takraake in se mar miTe
ab siy'ah dil pattharaoN ke daagh kiyuN dhouti hei mauj?.

Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.

jawab!

maoj dar maoj hawa kartee hai yeh raz e'yaaN

zindagee narGhah-e-t^ufaaN meN hai saHil meN naheeN!


Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.
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Post by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:23 am




saal ke poore baarah maheene aankh se aanso jaaree heiN

saawan bhaadooN kee baarish meiN sail-e-ravaaN kee baat kahaaN.


Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.



Nazir.

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:56 pm

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saal ke poore baarah maheene aankh se aanso jaaree heiN

saawan bhaadooN kee baarish meiN sail-e-ravaaN kee baat kahaaN.

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.

jawaab!

ham dasht nawardooN ka a'jab Haal hai yaro
sao saal bh~ee ho jaeeN to Ghurbat naheeN jatee

kiyooN ham bh~ee dua'a maNg nah leeN haath~ uTh~a kar
be sood kisee shakhS kee meHnat naheeN jatee.

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.
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Post by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:00 pm




shaam-e-gham aape meiN rehnaa hougayaa dushwaar jab

beqaraar aankhaoN se ooski behgaye aansoo bahut.


(alif)
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.


Nazir.

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Wed Jan 24, 2007 11:48 pm

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shaam-e-gham aape meiN rehnaa hougayaa dushwaar jab

beqaraar aankhaoN se ooski behgaye aansoo bahut.

(alif)
Shayer: Abdullah Nazir.

jawaab!

pech-o-kham rah-e-muHabbat ke naz^ar meN rakh~na

kaarwaaN ko nah sarabooN ke safar meN rakh~na

raone walooN ko rulata hai zamanah akcar

koee aaNsu nah kabh~ee deedah-e-tar meN rakh~na.

( Shayer Abdullah Nazir)
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Post by MAHROO » Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:30 pm

aansoo nah baha faryaad nah kar
tu bhool jaa hamko yaad nah kar

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Post by hassan_bashir » Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:31 pm

tumheN bhul jaayeN yeh hotaa naheeN hai
koee vaqt ho dard sotaa naheeeeeeeN hai
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Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:20 pm

jaanta hooN aek aese shakhS ko maiN bh~ee Muneer
Gham se pathth~ar ho geya lekin kabh~ee roya naheeN

Muneer Neyazee.

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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar » Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:37 pm

a'adat hee bana lee hai tum ne to Muneer apnee
jis sheher meN bh~ee rehna uktaae huwe rehna.

(Muneer)

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Post by Rehana.A » Thu Apr 12, 2007 9:22 pm

Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:a'adat hee bana lee hai tum ne to Muneer apnee
jis sheher meN bh~ee rehna uktaae huwe rehna.

(Muneer)
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Dil kay muosum ujeeb muosum haien
muosumon ka madaar hey in par
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