Raheel saheb
ghazal pasand karne k liye shukria
aur aap ki dua ka bhee shukria
regards
zmufti

Sara jee
ghazal pasand karney k liye aap ka shukria
regards
zmufti

Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir saheb
Tasleemat
MaiN aap ki behad mamnoon hoN ke aap ne meri ghazal per raaye di
aap ki tajaweez ke mutabiq ghazal maiN tabdeeliaN kar di haiN
umeed hai aayinda bhee raahnumaai farmaate rahieN ge
shukria
wasalaam
zmufti

Mahtaab saheb aap ki nazm achi lagi aik typo mistake theek kar laiN Arsh-e-Muala ko aap ne durust nahiN likha aur aik sher samajh nahiN aaya beti rozi hai beti roti hai beti barkat ki cheez hoti hai beti ko rehmat kaha jata hai aur woh koi cheez nahiN insaan hoti hai meray comment ka bura mat maaniy...

Ahl-e-bazm aadaab maiN apni adna si kawish aap ki khidmat maiN pesh kar rahi hoN umeed hai aap apni aaraa se agah kareN ge wasalaam zmufti 1. Rishtey bana chukey haiN kayii is nagar main hum "Rahat watan ki yaad kareN kaya safar main hum" 2. Chehra khushi ka dekhay zamana guzar gaya Ghut g...

Duniya jee
aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayyii
tamam asha'ar pasand aaye
meri janib se daad qabool kijye
regards
zmufti

Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir Saheb
Tasleemat
Mirza Ghalib ke misra per aap ki Tarahi Ghazal buhat pasand aayii
Tamam asha'ar buhat achey haiN
Mujh naacheez ki janib Daad-o-mubarikbaad Qabool kijye
Wasalaam
zmufti

Mahtaab saheb agar aap khud hi nishandahi kar daitey to acha thaa
aur agar mehfil maiN koi aur bhee nishandahi karey to mera bhala ho jaye ga
regards
zmufti

Ahl-e-bazm aadaab apni aik adna si kawish pesh kar rahi hoN aap ki aara ka intizaar rahey ga regards zmufti http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b24/zmufti/meraybaad.gif 1. ham bichar jaain kabhi to hamieN socha karna hasraton se dar-o-deewar ko dekha karna 2. yaad jab aaoN to milne mujhe aaya karna me...

Tahira jee
aap ki yeh baatieN buhat bhali lagiiN
hamieN yeh baatieN sunaney ka buhat shukria
regards
zmufti

phir zabt ka daman choot gaya, phir dil pe raha kab apna bas maujoN mai jo shiddat aai thi, daryaa ke kinaaray toot gaye jo andhay saNp ko chiryaa se pairhoN mai ghiza pahoNchata hai vo aik sahaara kaam aaya , jab saray sahaaray toot gaye Mahtaab saaheb buhat khoob meri janib se daad qabool kijye r...

Mohtaram Abdullah nazir saheb Tasleemat aapki taaza ghazal buhat pasand aayii tamam asha'ar khoob haiN aur khaas tor per yeh asha'ar chaman meiN raunaq-e-Husn-e-Tarab nahiN baaqi parinde uRgaye sub aashiyaanah jalte hii nahiN hei pursish-e-beemaar se lagaau use keh taubah bhool nah jaaye qaZaa ke ta...

Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir saheb
Tasleemat
aap ka buhat shukria
wasalaam
zmufti

Amjad bhai Allama Iqbal ki Nazm "Mehdi" per aap ka tabsara buhat jaama'a hai aur aam feham hai. aam qari Iqbal ke kalam ko kuch mushkil jaan kar is se gurezaaN hai is liye aap ka yeh tabsara aik qaumi khidmat hai. Iqbal aik aafaqi shaayer haiN un ka paigham bilkhasoos bar-e-sagheer ki musa...

Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir saheb Tasleemat umeed hai aap kahairiat se honge aap se aik sawal poochna chahti hoN urdu ke kuch ilfaaz haiN jaisey mayyat niyyat wasiiatنیّت میّت وصیّت قیّوم in sab maiN ye per tashdeed hai sawal yeh hai keh taqtii maiN in maiN se kissi aik yeh ko girana jayyez hai aur niyy...