Naheed jee,
Adaab
Aap say guzarish hai k ghazal roman maiN bhee paste kar daiN kyonK do teen baar k koshish k bawajood nazar nahin aa rahi qasoor shayad meray hi computer ka ho
regards
zarqa

Riaz sahib,
Aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayii
share karnay ka shukria
zmufti

Najma jee
Ghazal kahan hai
kal se kai bar dekah
dhonde se nahin milli
Aakhir kahan gayii
zarqa

Duniya jee
Aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayii
share karnay ka shukria
zmufti

zia sahib
aap ki ghazal achi lagi
meri taraf say daad Qabool kijye
zmufti

Dunya jee Aap ki hosla afzaai Kay liye meiN behad mamnoon hon Aap ka mashwara bhee acha hai magar yeh sher mein nay kuch is tarah kar diya hai "Aur barh jaye gi yeh ruswaai Zakhm-e-dil aap ko dikhaney se" Aap sab say pehli post ko agar dekhien Aap ki raye aur mubarakbad meray liye buhat eh...

Zia sahib,
Adaab,
Aap ki hosla afzaii kay liye behad mamnoon hon umeed hai ayinda bhee shukria ka mouqa den gay
allah hafiz
zarqa

Duniya jee
Aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayii
I like this one best

Mit gayii is k tabasum ki latafat jab se
Roushnee ho na sakee meray andhere ghar mein

take care
zarqa

Najma jee
Aapki ghazal buhat pasand aayii share karnay ka shukria
pehlay sher K barey meiN Duniya ka khayal durust maaloom hota hai
kia kia na kehtay rahey sounds better
allah hafiz
zarqa

Sara jee
Aap ka be had shukria yeh Aap ka bara pan hai keh meri hosla afzaai kar rahi hein

Anis hasan Sahib
Meri koshish ko parhney ka shukria


Dua go
zarqa

Mahataab Qadar sahib
Aap ka behad shukria
dua go
zarqa

Khurram sahib
Aap ka behad shukria
dua go
zarqa

Janab Usmani sahib
Adab
Aap ki hosla afzaai ka be had shukria Aap nay shayad ghour nahin kia aur mujhe doosri baar sahiba ki jagah sahib likh diya
Na janey kiyon mujhe aakhri sher ya maqta mein apna naam likhna acha nahin lagta aur shayad yeh intihai zarori bhi nahin
thanks again
dua go
zarqa

Najma Jee,
Adab
Aap Ki raaye ka buhat shukria abhi wazn sahi karney nahin aye shayad maths kamzoor raha ho ya music sense kamzoor hai Aap ki hosla afzaai aur rahnumai donon darkar hein
dua go
zarqa

Aziz membran meri kuch basat tou nahin magar phir bhi meri yeh kawish hazir hai aap ki aara ka intizar rahey ga zmufti unko fursat nahiN zamaney se Hamko Sapney naye sajaney se Wadi-I-khawab hi tou hai ke jahaN ”Phool khiltey haiN muskaraney se “ Aur barh jaye gi yeh ruswaai Zakhm-e-dil aap ko dikha...