sara_j wrote:Zarqa ji,

bohat umda ghazal hai. sabhi ashaar pasand aaye.

daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye

sara

shukria Sara jee
khush rahiye
zmufti

Muzaffar bhai
ghazal per tabsare ke liye aap ki mamnooN hooN
aap ne jo mashware diyye heN akcar achche heN
in per ghaur karti hooN
regards
zmufti

Sadr-e-Mushaira ahl-e-bazm aadaab apni adna si kaawish mushaire meN pesh kar rahi hooN aap sab ki aaraa ka intzaar rahe ga regards zmufti 1. chukka diye youN hi sab qarz-e-dostaaN maiN ne Paraii aag meN jhooka yeh aashiyaaN maiN ne 2. Khasare ka kiyya sauda, ganwaaye jaan-o-dil Kamaaye dard hi, paay...

buhat khoob
Sara jee
aap ki ghazal aap ka andaaz sabhi buhat pasand aaye
meri janib se daad qabool kijye
regards
zarqa
aakhri sher maiN aap ne ashk ain se likha jo alif se hota hai

Yaran-e-baZm-e-mushae'rah aadaab! Sadr-e-mushae'rah Janab Abdullah NaZir SaHib kee ijaZut ho to GuZarish#29 ke liye apnee aek aor koshish pesh kanaa chaooN gaa. mulaHiZ^ah farmaiYe. GhaZal ada-e-khaaS se cheRee hai daastaaN maiN ne! kiyaa hai ehl-e-GulistaaN ko ham ZubaaN maiN ne! ba WaQt-e-Giryah ...