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- Tue Apr 05, 2005 7:07 am
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Lafz par Ashaar#5--" ZAKHAM"
- Replies: 81
- Views: 10379
zakhm
zakhm-e-dil jiski inaayat hei bhalaa kiyaa jaane
Uskaa beemaar tarastaa hei maseeHaayi ko
Nazir.
- Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:42 am
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Shair ka jawab shair main dejeye
- Replies: 637
- Views: 98606
javaab
saaqi kii ek nigaah ne, mastiy-e-umr bakhsh dii
jaane kidhar ko rind ne, baadah o jaam rakh diyaa.
Nazir.
- Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:32 am
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!
- Replies: 962
- Views: 77695
"housh"
Housh se kyaa kaam hei raah-e-muHabbat meiN mujhe
her qadam per yeh gumaaN houtaa hei minzil aagaiee.
(her / aagaiee)
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Nazir.
- Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:08 am
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Lafz par Ashaar#5--" ZAKHAM"
- Replies: 81
- Views: 10379
"zakhm"
zakhm sehte rahe jafaa'oN ke
Lab pah faryaad tak nahiN aayii.
Nazir.
- Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:02 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: hosh_mandaan-e-adab hoNT siyaa karte haiN...taazah Ghazal
- Replies: 6
- Views: 438
Bahut khoob
MuHtarami
Hashmat Usmani Saihba Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi khaas Taur per SheAr No.2, 6 aur maqTaA. Waise saare ke saare ashAar bahut achche heiN.
Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
- Mon Apr 04, 2005 4:59 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: EK GHAZAL:ho sake to aap mujh par ek eh,saaN kijiye
- Replies: 20
- Views: 2194
Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtaramah Najma Saahibah, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal behut pasand aayi. Saare ashAar pasand aaye. MaiN is ghazal per tabsirah karte houe yeh bataadenaa chaahtaa hooN ke maiN usko aek kuhnah mashq shayer kii ghazal samajhkar apni raaye pesh karraha hooN jis se aapka muttafiq hounaa zaroori...
- Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:37 am
- Forum: BeHc o MubaaHica
- Topic: Aek sawaal ustad-e-mohtaram se.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1929
Javaab Haazir hei
MuHtaramah Saara Saahibah Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, TaraHi ghazal ke liye diye houe misreA kii gireh Ke taAlluq se aapke sawaal ka mukhtasar javaab yeh hei: KitabaoN se paRhne waalaoN ko ghalaTfehmi housakti hei kiyoonke akcar jagah yehi likhkhaa hei ke diye houe misreA per doosra misrA lagaanaa. Loag...
- Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:56 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: aik ghazal
- Replies: 14
- Views: 1069
Aapki ghazal meiN lafz "dekh" se harf kaaf kaa gir
MuHtaramah Naheed V. Saahibah, Lafz dekh ke baare meiN aap ne likhkha hei: aap kee tavajjoh ke liye mamnoon hooN aur hoslah afzaayee ke liye buhat shukriya! haaN, mujhye iss baat kaa idraak hai ke mandarja baala she'r meN :diekh: kee :kaaf: gir rahi hai, kyaa iss behr meN ye ravaa ho saktaa hai? bu...
- Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:31 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!
- Replies: 962
- Views: 77695
woh
Woh kyaa suneNge kisi benawaa ke ranj o alam
fughaaN hei jin ke liye naghmah o Tarab kii TaraH
(fughaaN / Tarah)
Nazir.
- Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:24 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Lafz par Ashaar#5--" ZAKHAM"
- Replies: 81
- Views: 10379
"zakhm"
zakhm-e-aazurdagiy-e-dil jou diyaa hei tuu ne
souchtaa hooN ke muHabbat kii nishaani tou nahiN
Nazir.
- Sun Apr 03, 2005 10:02 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: g
- Replies: 3
- Views: 222
Bahut khoob
Janab
Atiq ulrahman safi Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. saare ashAar bahut hii khoobsoorat andaaz meiN kahe houe heiN.
Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
- Sun Apr 03, 2005 9:56 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: g
- Replies: 3
- Views: 200
Bahut khoob
Janab Aakif Ghani Saahib, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, MaiN apna tabsirah shurooA karne se pahle yeh bataadenaa chaahtaa hooN ke aapkaa meri aaraa se muttafiq hounaa zaroori nahiN hei. [/color] 1-ManzileN mil jaayengi, gar rehnumaa koii tou hou Chal paRenge ham bhii lekin raastah koii tou hou Pahle misre...
- Sat Apr 02, 2005 2:35 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!
- Replies: 962
- Views: 77695
"ab"
ab tak heiN khush naseeb jo baaham heiN dousto
dunyaa meiN purkhuloos bahut kam heiN dousto
(dunyaa / dousto)
Nazir.
- Sat Apr 02, 2005 2:18 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Shair ka jawab shair main dejeye
- Replies: 637
- Views: 98606
javab
Kisko hei khauf-e-kharzaar-e-alam
jab miraa ghamguzaar baaqii hei.
Nazir.
- Sat Apr 02, 2005 2:04 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Lafz par Ashaar#5--" ZAKHAM"
- Replies: 81
- Views: 10379
"zakhm"
Ilaaj-e-zkham-e-dil-e-nasaboor kar na sake
aur us pah kehte hou tum ghamguzaar hou mere.
Nazir.