Adaab Irfan Sahib!

Bohot Khoob ghazal hay, mujhe sher#1,2,6 zyada pasand aaye. Daad pesh hay.

Adaab Sahil Sahib!

Bohot khoob ghazal irshaad farmayi aapne, daad qubool kijiye.

ghazal manoos heN kuchh aise GHamon ke acar se hum mar jayenge KHushi ki zara si KHabar se hum shehroN meN dasht se he ziyadah darindagi is KHouf se nikalte nahiN apne ghar se hum deta nahiN too husn ko kiyoN jazbah e wafa ? poochhenge yeh sawaal shah e behr o bar se hum marGHoob he unheN jo bohat ...

aadaab, dosto! W.adaab! ek taaza Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. mulaahiza farmaaiye aur apnii raae se navaaziye. Ghazal aaiina mujh ko pas-o-pesh meN taktaa kyuuN hai mujh meN Khaamii hai to kahne meN jhijhaktaa kyuuN hai :shock: Ye kesa aaeena hay jo KhaamiyaN batane meiN jhijhak raha hay. Wese agar a...

Amoodi wrote:Woh fantastic

Bohot shukria Amoodi Bhayya,

Achha laga k tum ne meri ghazal paRhi aur pasand ki.

sara_j wrote:
Dear anmol,

salaam.

bohat din baad tumhara kalaam parh ker bohat khushi hui,

hamesha ki tarah bohat ache ashaar likhi ho, aur bhi intezar rahega.
zor e qalam aur ziyada.

sara.

ThanQ so much Sara dear. Khush raho. Tumhari raaye se hamesha hosla'afzayi hoti hay.

Dear Raush,

Bohot achha laga tumheN tarahi misre pe likhta dekh kar, aur kya hi umda ashaar nikaale heN tum ne, maiN to heraan reh gayi. Daad aur mubarakbaad qubool karo.

Mahtab Qadr wrote:Anmol sahiba bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki aane , Mubarakbaad :)
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

ThanQ Sir,

Aap ki shabbash paa kar achha laga.

saari dunya ko bhuladete hum bus wo aik shakhs hamara hota bahut khubsurat ghazal ka bahut khubsurat share.... or tumharee ghazal tu kya hee ghazal hai tumhare share k jawab main aik share hazir hai. saari dunya ko bhula beThe tum warna har shakhs tumhara hota :-) Thanks Tiger . Tumhari daad se khu...

zmufti wrote:anmol jee
aadaab
very nice
thanks for sharing
zmufti

Adaab Zarqa ji,

Bophot shukria pazeerayi ka.

Handsome wrote:WOW zaberdast

Wow thanks. Aap ki besaakhta daad bohot pasand aayi. Actually i should say, baRi handsome daad thi.

Adaab Zia Sahib!

Aap ki ghazal bohot khoob hay. Meri dili daad qubool kijiye.

Adaab! Aik naya kalaam le kar hazir hui huN. Ye ghazal do teen maah se likhi hui thi, socha aaj post kar hi dooN. Umeed hay aap sab ko pasand aayegi. http://www.urdustan.net/mehmaan/ghazal_21.gif Ghazal 1. Gar ye sanjog hamara hota Kya zamane ko gawara hota 2. Chaandni raat me hum tum hote Aur saman...

Ehl-e-bazm ko adaab! Zia Sahib apni ghazal mb per post nahiN kar paa rahay, is liye unhoN ne mujhe send ki hay, pesh karti huN.. _________________________________________________________ Yaaran-e-meHfil, aadaab apnee Gher Haaziree ki wajh to maiN chaupaal maiN paish kar hi chukaa hoN , ab aek taveel...

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