bahut khoob , Jigar sahib ki shayeri waqai apne rang ki munfarid shayeri hai.
bay faida alam nahi , bekaar gham nahi
taufeeq de khuda to ye naimat bhi kam naih

Mashallah , aik aik sher parh kar lutf aata raha , bahut khoob Abudllah Nazir sahib ki ghazal pesh karne par Rehana sahiba aapka mamnoon hoN

Najma sahiba ghazal pasand ai, bataur e khas 3,7aur maqta lajawab haiN

Mahtab Qadr

wah waah bahut khoob , umda kalam aur achi raye

Mohatramee S.Almas sahib bahut umda kalam hai kafi din baad aapki ghzal parhna naseeb huva hai , umeed ke ainda bhi nawazisheiN jari raheiNgi.
Mahtab Qadr

sher to tafreeh e taba ke taur par likh dia tha magar aap chahti haiN to isi tarah chaliye aap ki baat par amal karte haiN :)

un se bhagaya na gaya
ham se jaaya na gaya.

ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya

Assalam alaikum wa rahma
JALPARI ka is khoobsurat bazm e yaraane e adab mai Dili khairmaqdam :)
khairandesh
Mahtab Qadr

shukria Mukarrar :)

Najma Sis Hamesha ki tarah daad o tahseen ke lye behad mashkoor hoN. shukria
Mahtab Qadr

Abdullah bhia Nawazish ke aapne apne kamaal e shafqat se in chand bemaya misroNko sharaf e qubooliat baksha. shukria Mahtab Qadr Janab Mahtaab Saahib, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, waah aap ne tou kamal hii kardiyaa. Bahut jald hii aap ne ghazal mukammal karli aur bhii muraSSaA ashAar ke saath. Saare ke sa...

Inayat hai Najma sahiba aap ki ,daad hausle barhaati hai. shukria
bahut bahut
Mahtab Qadr

najma wrote:waaah

vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai
apne hathoN mai iqtedaar e ghazal


bohat khoob janab mahtab qadr sahib


daad qubool kijiye

bohat khoob

intezaar unka,intezaar e ghazal raah takna hai,rahguzaar e ghazal jab se baad e naseem e deed mili dil bhi apna huva hai daar e ghazal misl e mahtaab unki khaamooshi guftagu unki aabshaar e ghazal mujh maiN taab e sukhan kahaN itni maiN huva kitna sharmsaar e ghazal vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai ...

Najma ji salaam aap ke walid marhoom ki ghazal ka aik aik sher unki sukhanwarana mashshaqi ka pata deta hai. Allah unheiN ghareeqe rahmat farmaye . bahut shaandaar kalam pesh kia hai aapne , aap ke walid e mohatram ki ghazal se ye bhi pata chalta hai ke aap ke suthre zauq aur fahm ko idraak darasl a...

sara ji shukria ,