tum ne to thak ke dasht mai khaimay lagaa liye
tanhaa katay kisi ka safar tum ko is se kiya
PARVEEN SHAKIR

Harf e tay se ashaar ka silsila shuroo kar raha hoN umeed ke aap bhi shareek hoNge

lijye sara sahiba ne joun alia ki ghazal asatiza ki shayeri mai pesh ki aur mujhe tay se sher mil gaya.. jaun alia ka sher hai.

thoka hai khoon mai ne hamesha mazaaq mai
mera mazaaq aap hameshaa urhaai ye
shukria

Najma sahiba bahut khoob ghazal hazb e mamool saari ghazal bahut achi hai, magar

haq is pe hay kuch mere bhi mazloom lahuu ka
ye sheh,r faqat aap ki jaageer naheeN hay

ye sher khas taur par bahut pasand aaya.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

Dua ji jis tarah kisi bhi muhem ki kamyaabi ke lye duaoN ki bahut ahmiat aur zaroorat hoti hai, isi tarah is adabi anjuman ko bhi aap ki aur aapki duaoN aur kawaishoN ki bahut zaroorat hai aap apni nigarishat se zaroor nawazti rehiye.

Bahut khoob janab Ateeq sahib . mashallah.

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Allah hafiz

khoob riaz sahib , ghazal apne riwayati manoN mai ubhar kar samne aai hai. balke in mauzuaat ko tark kardia jaye to ghazal ka sara maza hi jaata rahta hai. aap ke tamam sher khoobsurat kalioN pholon jaise lagay mahtaab o aaftaab ki tashbeehat bhi pasand aiN.
shukria

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Parveen shakir ki aik aur ghazal pesh hai

bekhudi be sabab nahi ghalib
kuch to hai jis ki parda dari hai
(Ghalib)