Mohatram Sarwar Raz Sahib Tasleemat aap ki is khoobsurat ghazal ka har sher pasand aaya, mazameen aur meer ka andaaz donoN hi lajawab haiN aapne meer ki zameen mai sher kahkar apni meer taqi meer se gahri wabastagi aur unke asloob se talluq aur apne ustadana andaaz e bayaN ka suboot dia hai. BAHUT B...

Zia sahib aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aai mashallah mushkil zameen maiN achay sher nikaale haiN aapne. khas taur par ye teen sher bahut achay haiN tum ko socheN yaa tumheN dekhaa kareN ? "tum hi batlaao k ab ham kyaa kareN ?" kon samjheygaa nigaahoN kii zabaaN ? kis ko dekheN aap gar pardah...

Taimoor Tariq Sahib aap ko ham sab aapki aur hamaairi is khoobsurat mahfil maiN dil ki gahrahiioN se KHUSHAAMDEED Kahte haiN. aap apni raye aur mashwaroN se bhi bazm ko nawazte rahiye. aur apni nigarishaat se bhi. Bahut Bahut Shukria Janab


Mahtab Qadr

agar aye nakhudaa toofaan se larhne ka dam kham hai
idhar kashtee ko mat laana ,idhar paani bahut kam hai

(namaloom)

waah waah Najma sahiba aapka aik aik sher murassa hai, aur aapki kuhnamashqi ka suboot bhi. bahut khooob .

Najmi ji kiaa baat hai is mazoo par to aap ne kamaal kardia , aap ki nazm bahut rawaaaN aur asloob e bayaaN bahut khoobsurat hai. aap ki nazm ko barhkar to hameiN bhi Dyiana ki khoobioN sahi andaaza huva.
Mubarakbaad is kamyaab nazm par.
Mahtab Qadr

Alif se Allah aur shuroo karte haiN ham Allah ke naam se ,

ALLAH re is daur e siaasat ke karishmay
is daur mai insaan ko insaan ka dar hai (shabnam)

Najma sahiba ki tajveez aur Hashmat sahib ki tayeed sath hi sara ji ka approval in sab ke baad takheer ke baghair ye nai link shuroo ki jarahi hai. is se aik faida ye hoga ke bait bazi ke shayeqeen bhi mustafeeed ho sakeiN ge .
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

zarqa ji aapki koshish pasand aai , likhti rahiye Aziz membran meri kuch basat tou nahin magar phir bhi meri yeh kawish hazir hai aap ki aara ka intizar rahey ga zmufti Tumko fursat nahiN zamaney se Hamko Sapney naye sajaney se micl-e-jannat hai Wadi-I-khawab jahaN ”Phool khiltey haiN muskarney se “...

Aik Taaza Ghazal pesh khidmat hai apni aara aur naqd o basar se nawaaziye Mahtab Qadr jis roop mai tu chaahe maiN dhaltaa rahoN hardam? mousam to nahi hoN ke badaltaa rahoN hardam! jis cheez ko jee chaahe uthaaloN na kioN barhkar kioN aatish e hasrat mai hi jaltaa rahoN hardam tujhko bhi khyaal aay...

drshahi wrote:Mubarikbad qubool karain..jenab Mehtab sahib,
aur main nay aap ko private email kee thee lakin abhee tak jawab saiy mahroom hoon..

Dr. Shahid

Dr.Shahid sahib aapke pm ko mai ne apne desktop par download karlia tha aur action jari hai inshallah jald batoNga jo bhi progress ho.
shukria

mahtab saahib, adaab arz hai. aapki taaza ghazal pasand aayi. sabhi ashaar bohat khoob hain! lekin itni nadamat ke jis tarah dhaalo tou aap taiyyar hain dhalne ko :-) ghazal aprhte hue muskuraati rahi. sab hi ashaar bohat pasand aaye daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye. sara sara ji aap ki daad aur...

Bhayi MAHTAB QADR Saahib Aadaab o Tasleemaat, :? Hamari khush qismati hei ke aap hamare saath URDUBANDHAN per maujood heiN aur apne bharpoor taAaavun se hameN sarfaraz farmaarahe heiN. Nazir. [/size][/color] http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v521/naazir/mtb.jpg AOA, Meri taraf se b bahi ko bohat bo...

Assalam o Alaikum Aap Ahbaab Ki Khidmat meN Aik Ghazal Paish hay, kuchh dostooN nay pehlay bhi parri ho gi, Wassalam Ameen Asim Ameen Asim sahib is choti baher mai itni khoobsurat ghazal kahna yaqeenan aap ke kuhnamashqi aur qudrat e kalam ki daleel hai. behad pasand aai aapki Ghazal aur uski zamee...