janab mahtaab qadr sahib Theek saaRhe-chaar maah baa,d hamari janib se bhi DheroN mubarak wusool kijiyey ga, admin muqarrar kiye jane par. :grin: Najma ji shayed aapko yaad nahi raha ke aapne pahle bhi Mubarakbaad di ya aap sirf mujhe yaad dilaana chahti theiN ke mai ne aapka jawaab nahi dia. donoN...

janab mehtab qadr sahib merii taraf say bhii dheron mubarakkkkk! ab kya karoon :oops: phool pesh karna naheen ata mujhay, bass seedhii saadii c post hi kar letii hoon to bara teer maar letii hoon, ziyada kuch aata hii naheen. lekin dill ki gehraiyyon say mubarak zaroor qubool kijiyey. khair-andesh ...

Rehana Ahmed sahib ki aik ghazal to home page par hai hi aik aur ghazal mulahiza farmaye.

aslaam_u_alikam ae dost aa bhi jaa keh teraa intizaar hey khaamosh hun magar meraa dil bekaraar hey aankhien yeh raasta teraa dekhein hain baar baar aur ab bhi bepanaah mujhey tujh sey pyaar hey her dam key jhootey wadon sey yeh dil figaar hey is dil ko merey tujh sey shikayat hazaar hey ser kham k...

waqar_masood wrote:khush amdeed

Amin Asim sahib aap ko mai bhi is khoobsurat bazm maiN is umeed ke sath khushaamdeed kahta hoN ke aap bharpoor andaaz mai hissa laeiNge.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

salaam Mahtab saaHib, aapkaa taaza ba taazah kalaam paRh kar bahot lutf aayaa aur aapkii aur janaab e Sarwar saaHib kii guftugu se mujhe bahot kuchh seekhne ka mauq'a mila. sach to yeh hai ki aapkaa kalaam mujhe bahot pasand aayaa hamesha kii taraH. saare she'r bahot Khoob haiN. shukria. Hashmat w....

muHibbee Mehtab SaaHeb:aadaab! waah, waah! kyaa Khoob-Soorat zameen muntaKhib kee hai! is kee naGhmagee aur zer-o-bam bohat dilkash haiN aur aap ne jaZbaat kee a'kkaasee bh`ee u'mdah kee hai. ba'Z^ miSre' to nihaayat hee dilkash haiN. Ghazal par meree daad HaaZ^ir hai! qubool keejiYe. agar ijaazat ...

Mahtab sahib Buhat khoob Aap ki yeh ghazal pasand aayi dad qabool kijye mujhe kuch ziyada ilm to nahin magar meray khayal mein kissi shokh haseena ka daman nahin Aanchal dhalkta hai allah hafiz zmufti aap ki baat bahut sahi hai , mere zahn mai anchal hi tha magar shayed likhte waqt ghalat likh gaya...

Aik Taaza Ghazal pesh khidmat hai apni aara aur naqd o basar se nawaaziye Mahtab Qadr jis roop mai tu chaahe maiN dhaltaa rahoN hardam mousam to nahi hoN ke badaltaa rahoN hardam jis cheez ko jee chaahe uthaaloN na kioN barhkar kioN aatish e hasrat mai hi jaltaa rahoN hardam tujhko bhi khyaal aaye ...

Aik Taaza Ghazal pesh khidmat hai apni aara aur naqd o basar se nawaaziye Mahtab Qadr jis roop mai tu chaahe maiN dhaltaa rahoN hardam? mousam to nahi hoN ke badaltaa rahoN hardam! jis cheez ko jee chaahe uthaaloN na kioN barhkar kioN aatish e hasrat mai hi jaltaa rahoN hardam tujhko bhi khyaal aaye...

Aanchal wrote:assalamlikum

waah waah Anchal ji aap ne us Hyderabaad ke us mushaire ki yaad taza kardi jis maiN JaNnisar Akhtar ne ye ghazal parhi thi aur ham ne achay bachoNki tarah chup chaap samiyeen ki pichli nishistoN mai baith kar ye ghazal suni aur behad lutf uthaaya tha. bahut bahut shukria
Mahtab Qadr

Faiz sahib ki aik ghazal hai “hum par teri chah ka ilzam hi to hai” Is zameen main kuch likhnay ki koshish ki hai aap ki aara ka intizaar rahey ga zmufti Hum par khudsari ka ilzam hi to hay Hum hein sarkash yeh dashnam hi to hai Tujhe papand-e-wafa Karen to kaisay Hamari har koshish bas nakaam hi t...

akifghani wrote:Sallam!
Ek taza tareen ghazal pesh hai.
Kaisee lagi zaroor bataiey ga.

Akif Ghani sahib aapki nigaarish pasand aai. shukria
Mahtab Qadr

aadaab !! ek mukhtasar si ghazal haazir-e-khidmat hai. :) dil-e-naadaan kee qayadat mein umr guzree hai kis aziyat mein tum bhi ho kya kisi ki qurbat mein?? ham bhi jalte the yun hi furqat mein !! ab tujhe bhool bhi nahin sakte mubtilaa hain ajab museebat mein kisko fursat thi ghar banane kee log r...

sabki Khdmat meN salaam aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa. wassalam wah waah bahut khoob achi aNkheiN haiN aapki :) waise sher no. 2 mai agar yoN karleiN to ziada munasib hoga raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN kioN ke eimaan ka qafia yahaN wazan ke a...