Basheer badr ki aik ghazal pesh e khidmat hai

sabki khidmat meN Salaam Falsteen k Hwale se aik aazad nazm aap sabki basartoN ki nazr. aap ki aara'a kaa intezaar rehay gaa. wassalam tahira masood sahiba aap ne to kamal kardia isqadar khoobsurat aur asarangaiz nazm pesh ki hai ke jee khush ho gaya. Allah aapki salahiyatoN mai izaafa farmaye aur ...

Mahtab Sb, aadaab! aap ne ek aise samaajee mas.ale ko mauzuua-e-suKhan banaayaa hai jis kii jaanib kam logoN kii tavajjuh jaatii hai. umdah bayaan ke saath saath aap intiKhaab-e-mauzuua ke liye bhii daad ke mustahiq haiN. so qubuul farmaaiye! aap kii Ghazal dekh kar ye jaanne kaa ishtiyaaq huaa ki ...

Walaikum Salaam

vo aaye bazm mai itnaa to meer ne dekhaa
phir us ke baad charaghoN mai raoshni na rahi

KHUSHAAMDEED
Mahtab Qadr

Janab Shahzaad Hyder sahib
salaam e masnoon

Bahut khushi huvi aap ko is bazm mai dekhkar , yaqeenan ham sab aapko dil ki gahraiyoN se KHUSHAAMDEED kahte haiN. umeed karte haiN ke aap ke mazameen aur degar nigarishat se istefaade ka mauqa milta rahega.
shukria

Mahtab Qadr

Mahtab bhai aur moHtaram Nazir saHib assalam-o-alaikum maiN aap dono ka bahot mamnoon hooN ke aap ne is baare meiN meri rehnumaai farmaai. dar.asl mujhe jo bhi baat samajh na aaye to maiN apni tashveesh ka izhaar kar deta hooN, aur isi vajah se bahot kuch seekhne ko milta hai. agar maiN Mahtab bhai...

Muhtaram Mahtab Qadr Saahib Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Saare ashAar achche heiN. Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Mandarja-e-zail per Amjad Saahib kii raaye door'ras nahiN hei. (((barkateiN dastar ki kaise rook loN ab to ghar se maehmaN jaanay lagay ))) Lafz...

salaam dosto, aaj maiN apne ham_vatan shaa'ir janaab-e-Akbar "Allahabadi" kaa ek kalaam pesh kar raha huN aur ummeed hai ki aap unkii pesheen_goiiyoN se ittefaaq kareNge aur apna sar dhuneNge/dhuneNgi . :wink: :lol: :lol: yeh maujooda tareeqe reh-e-mulk-e-'adam hoNge naii tai'hzeeb hogii,...

Irfan Abid sahib salam e masnoon hisaar-e-zaat se gar ham nikal nahiiN sakte diye hamaare tafakkur ke jal nahiiN sakte bahut umda khyal hai hai inqilaab-e-zamaanaa kaa Khvaab be.maanii ham apne aap ko jab tak badal nahiiN sakte bilkul baja farmaya hai, khuda ne aajtak us qaum ki halat nahi badli , n...

barkateiN dastar ki kaise rook loN ab to ghar se maehmaN jaanay lagay "khayaal to bahot umda hai, magar Mahtab bhai, doosre misra mujhe vazn se kharij lag rahaa hai, aap ne "mahmaaN" ka kia vazn iste'maal kiya hai. khudaara is per roshnee Daal ker meri mushkil Hal kijiye " Amjed ...

dosto salam shummu sahib ko is bazm ki modship di ja rahi hai, hameiN umeed hai ke vo is zimmedari ko qubool karieNgi.shukria woh sab to theek hai magar main SAHIB kab se ban gayi :twisted: waise bahut bahut shukriya mahtab sahab is izzat afzaayi ka...inshaAllah poori koshish karungi apni zimmedaar...

dosto salam
shummu sahiba ko is bazm ki modship di ja rahi hai, hameiN umeed hai ke vo is zimmedari ko qubool karieNgi.shukria

Lijye Shummu sahibaa aap ki yaad dihani ke sabab islah kardi gai hai.
shukria

Membran-e Urdubandhan ko mera Salam, Yeh Ghazal ek tarhee mushaireh ke liye haal hi meN kahi thee. Ummid hai aap ko pasaNd aayegi aur apne graNqadr tabsare se nawazeNge. Aapka Mukhlis, Jawaid Badauni -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Ghaflat-e-yaar kah...

Naheed sahiba aap ki ghazal ka har sher behad pasand aaya. aap yaqeenan is khoobsurat zameen mai aik kaamyaab ghazal kahne par mubarakbaad ki haqdaar haiN. bahut umda ghazal hai.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

Josh ki Ghazal