Khaleeji mulkoN se halaat ke taqaze par apne watan rukhsat hone holoN ko dekh kar kuch sher kahne ki koshish ki thi..aap bhi dekye aur raye se nawaziye. shukria Ilm o fun ke sayebaaN jaanay lagay karwaaN ke karwaaN jaanay lagay dhoop sahraaoN ki itni barh gaayi tayeraan e khusbayaN jaanay lagay bark...

Shummu wrote:tujh se kis tarah mai.n izhaar-e-tamannaa karataa
lafz suujhaa to maanii ne baGaavat kar dii


lafz/dii

di mujhe us ne mohabbat ke ewaz mai nafrat
mai khareedar raha,phir bhi khasaare mai raha

khasaara

[color] Janab Bhaayi Mahtab Qadr Saahib [/color] Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :) Aap ne likhkhaa hei: ((( Mohatram ul muqaam Abdullah Nazir sahib aappki tashreeh aur wazahat umeed ke qaraeen ne note karli hogi. mamnoon hoN aapkiis yaad dihaani ka magar is baat ki islah mere bas mai yoN nahi ke ye Ghazal ...

sabi wrote:Sab Urdubandhan members ko mera salaam!!
ummeed hai ki aap sab log ka har din khushiyon sey bhara rahein :) :D

Sabi

Sabi aap ko bhi ham sab ki taraf se behad khushaamdeed aur tashreef laane ka shukria, Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe .
Mahtab Qadr

sabi wrote:Sab Urdubandhan members ko mera salaam!!
ummeed hai ki aap sab log ka har din khushiyon sey bhara rahein :) :D

Sabi

Sabi aap ko bhi ham sab ki taraf se behad khushaamdeed aur tashreef laane ka shukria, Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe .
Mahtab Qadr

Mahtab Qadr Sahib Asslam Alaikom. Hum chand meter ke faasle par rehte huay mulaqat nahiN hoti. Urdubandhan eh kami puri kar raha hai. Bohat bohat Mubarak. Salem Bashwar Walaikum salam va rahma sahi farmaya aapne salem bhai. koshish karte haiN inshallah jald mulaqat ki. Abdullah bhai se maloom hva t...

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جرات ہے تو افکار کي دنيا سے گزر جا
ہيں بحر خودي ميں ابھي پوشيدہ جزيرے
کھلتے نہيں اس قلزم خاموش کے اسرار
جب تک تو اسے ضرب کليمي سے نہ چيرے

mukarramee Mehtab SaaHeb:aadaab! aap ke Khut^oot^ ko paRh kar maiN is nateejah par poNhchaa hooN keh ham donoN alag alag :wave lengths: par haiN aur :ijtimaa'-e-Z^iddain: kee koyee ummeed naheeN hai. aap ne jo kuch` kahaa hai woh aap kee taaweelaat ke nateejeh meN SaHeeH ho gaa aur mujh` ko in se k...

Mahtab Sb, aadaab! aap kii Ghazal dekhii, aur lutf.andoz huaa. baRii naadir taraakeeb istemaal kii haiN aap ne, aur Ghazal qaarii par apnaa asar chhoRne meN kaamyaab hai. daad qubuul keejiye! niyaazmand, Irfan :Abid: Mohatram Irfan Abid sahib, salaam e masnoon aapki is napi tuli aur fankarana daad ...

Assalam-o-a'laikum, moHtarami M.Q SaaHib , aap ki yeh dil-kash ghazal paRhee to bahut pehle thee, magar bar-waqt jawaab na de saka, jis keleye maiN tah-e-dil se maa'zirat chaahta hoN :oops: . aap ne to kamaal kardiyaa SaaHib !! kyaa dil-kash payraaye maiN itne u'mdah mazaameen ko qalam-band kardiya...

Wah Wah Wah bahut khoob Mahtab sahab....takraar-e-lafzi behad pasand aayi ghazal mein....ek ek sher lajawaab hai..dher saari daad haazir hai is khoobsurat ghazal pe :) Shumaila Shummu ji ,Nawazish , Karam , Shukria , Mahrbaani Is walihaana aur purkhuloos daad ke lye mashkoor hoN. Mahtab Qadr

Janab Mehtaab Qadr saahib Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :) Aap ne Allamah Iqbal kii aik mash'hoor ghazal paish karke urdubandhan ke paRhne waalaoN ko mamnoon farmaayaa. "MaiN hii tou aik raaz thaa seena-e-kaa'inaat meiN" Is misreA meiN lafz "aik" kii bajaaye "ik" hougayaa hei...

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KHUSHAMDEED

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Nusaybah saahib Mehfil-e-Urdubandhan mein aapka swaagat hai

Khushaamdeed naye mahman Nusaybah ji ke lye :)

Mahtab Qadr

sara_j wrote:main aarzuu-e-jaaN likhuuN yaa jaan-e-aarzuu

tuu hii bataade naaz se iimaan-e-aarzuu

tuu hi / aarzu

tuu hi bataade naazneeN ye kaun naaz hai
tujh par khula ye kaise mire dil ka raaz hai (mazahiya filbadeeh)

Jeddah mai di gai aik tarah,:abhi kuch log haiN uspaar meray" par kahi gai aik ghazal.. unhaiN katwa rahay the yaar meray shhajar the jitnay sayadaar meray kahaN gum ho gaye haiN naqsh e pa sab huve kioN raastay dushwaar meray badaltay maosamoN ke saath badlay vo jo ahbaab thay dochaar meray k...