Assalam-o-a'laikum, moHtarami M.Q SaaHib, subHana Allah janaab !! kyaa khene aapne tu meHfil hi looT lee :shock: bahut hi u'mdah ghazal !! :D . masha Allah aap ne bahut u'mdah asha'aar nikaale aaye haiN . mujhe tu poori ghazal hi pasand aayee, daad qabool kejeye :D . shukriya mokhliS: Zia Baloch br...

Jeddah mai di gai aik tarah,:abhi kuch log haiN uspaar meray" par kahi gai aik ghazal.. unhaiN katwa rahay the yaar meray shhajar the jitnay sayadaar meray wah bohat a'Alaa bohat khoob!!!! zabardast!!!!! [/color] kahaN gum ho gaye haiN naqsh e pa sab huve kioN raastay dushwaar meray mukarrer z...

badaltay maosamoN ke saath badlay vo jo ahbaab thay dochaar meray koi to lay sabaq in zalzaloN say bharay haiN shahr ke akhbar meray banaya hai makaN donoN ne milkar zameeN unki dar o deewar meray Wah!!! Bahut khoob Sarfaraz sahab....ye ash'aar bahut umda hain..daad haazir hai :) Shumaila shummu ji...

salaam Sarfaraz saaHib, aapkii taraHii Ghazal paRh kar bahot lutf aayaa. subHaan Allah, waah waah, kia kahne. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaadah. pahle she'r ko to aap ENVIRONMENTALISTS ke nazar kar deN. vo bahot Khush hoNge: unheN kaTvaa rahe the yaar mere shajar the jitne saaya_daar mere urdusta...

kahaN gum ho gaye haiN naqsh e pa sab huve kioN raastay dushwaar meray badaltay maosamoN ke saath badlay vo jo ahbaab thay dochaar meray mahtab qadr sahib . umda, bay had umdaa ghazal tarteeb de hay .. buhut hi khubsoorat ashaar hain sab kay sab aur takhayyal bhi khoob hay ..umda aslob e beyaan hay...

Safiya sahiba jo urdu websites ki bahut purani member haiN ham unheiN apni is nai aur khooobsurat bazm mai tah e dil se khushaamdeed kahte haiN. urdustan se rabt rakhne wale purane kai sathi safiya se zaroor waqif hoNge. saifya aik achi shayera bhi haiN . Khushaamdeed safiya ji :D

waqar_masood wrote:assalam o alaikum janab mahtab sahib

khoob.... buhut hi umdaa ghazal .. buhut payaray ... maqtaa to buhut hi umdaa hay ..buhut si daad qubool kejay aur share kernay kay leye buhut buhut shukria

waqar masood

walaikum salaam mohatram waqar masood sahib

aadab , zarranawazi ka shukria huzoor

sara_j wrote:Bohat umdah mahtaab saahib bohat umdah, poori ghazal pasand aayi aapke aur bhi kalaam ka intezar rahega.

sara

saraji bahut shukria ishallah hazbe mauqa kalam pesh karne ki jasarat karta rahoNga.
Mahtab Qadr

mukarramee Mehtab SaaHeb:aadaab! aap itnaa tarddud nah farmaaYeN. shaai'ree meN bohat kuch` kahaa jaataa hai aur us kaa kisee ke a'qeedah yaa a'mal se koyee ta,a'lluq naheeN hotaa hai! too jo sar-ba-sajdah huwaa kabh`ee to zameeN se aane lagee Sadaa tiraa dil to hai Sanam-aashnaa tujh`e kyaa mile g...

mukarramee Mehtab Qadr SaaHeb: aadaab! aap kee tavajjuh aur daad kaa shukriyah kin alfaaz^ meN adaa karooN! agar aap jaise suKhan-fehm himmat-afzaayee nah kareN to ham kis ke liYe she'r kaheN ge? :ahl-e-namaaz: se aap naam-nihaad muttaqee, parhezgaar log leN to harj naheeN hai! Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwa...

RAji sahiba salam bahut khoob , ghalib ki zameen mai sher kahna khud aik himmat aur hausle ki baat hai ,aur phir us ghazal mai koi baat paida karna dosri khoobi hai. baharhal aik achi ghazal ki peshkash par bahut daad pesh e khidmat hai. baqi zaban aur tarakeeb ki kuch bateiN ho sakta hai Mohatram S...

aadaab, dosto! :Jigar: Muradabadi kii zameen meN ek koshish pesh-e-Khidmat hai. hasb-e-maamuul aap kii raae kaa intizaar rahegaa. Ghazal Gham nahiiN, dunyaa jo samjhe Khaak meN shaamil mujhe aap kahiye, aap ne samjhaa hai kis qaabil mujhe maiN, ki thaa terii hii dhun meN do jahaaN se be.niyaaz tuu,...

yaaraan-e-bazm: aadaab-o-tasleemaat! ek Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai jo aaj hee huyee hai. shaayad kisee qaabil ho. apnee raaYe se nawaaz kar shukriyah kaa mauqa' i'naayat keejiYe. bal.k shukriyah peshagee hee HaaZ^ir hai! qubool farmaaiYe! Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar : ============================ Ghazal: ...

Bahut khoob NAZRANA sahib . ye falsafa to hameiN faiz ke samjhane se pahle hi samajh lena chahiye tha , khair subh ka bhoola shaam ko laut to aaye na..ab to kamse ham happy new year kahna chorheiNge.:)
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

Iqbal ki Ghazal " Meri nawa e shaouq"