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Mohatram Bhai Abdullah Nazir Sahib Salam Alaikum Wa Rahma Aap mujhe jisqadar jante haiN urdubandhan par koi aur nahi janta., aap hazraat ki is izzatafzai ke mai qabil na tha magar aap ne mujhe ye sharaf bakhsa .Allah aapkojazaye khair ata farmaye, mujhe apni bebuzaati aur kam mayegi ka ehsaas hai,um...

Aadaab o Tasleemaat, Jeddah meiN aik yeh bhi Tarahi misraA diyaa gayaa thaa Ahmad Nadeem qaasimi kaa: "maiN faqaT aik hii tasweer kahaaN tak dekhooN" Mujhe ghalaT fehmi hougaiee thii aur maiN ne samjhaa ke qaafiye (tehreer, taqdeer, ta'seer,) waghairah heiN. Ghazal mukammal karne ke bad p...

dosto: aadaab! ek Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN. raaYe kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar: =========================== GHAZAL: garmee-e-shauq ko zawaal naheeN i'shq paaband-e-maah-o-saal naheeN waaqif-e-soz-o-saaz-e-hastee hooN aur mujh` meN koyee kamaal naheeN baat-be-baat dil dukh`aate ho...

aslaam_u_alikam apni aik our adna si kawish key saath hazir hun umeed keti hun key aap sab apni kimati raye se nawazein gey. shukriya raah veeraan kis liye hai aaj dost anjaan kis liye hai aaj aaj kyuN jhoomti nahin titli gul pareshan kis liye hai aaj chandni bhi lage hai madham si chaand Hairaan k...

chahe chahat pari jamaal naho phir bhi uski koi misaal naho sab ko hai tootna bikharjaaana koi shae hai jisay zawaal na ho? vo khyaaloN mai kab se haiN meray unko shayed yahi khyaal na ho un se milte raho magar itnaa door hoN to bahut malaal na ho mahwe hairat ho kisllye mahtab mehrbaani bhi unki ch...

Mohatram Sarwar Raaz Sahib aap ko dil ki tamamtar gahraioN se mai is nai mahfil mai KHUSHAAMDEED kahta hoN. aap ki amad se yaqeenan is mahfil ki raunagoN ko aitebaar milega aur urdu ki khidmat ka jazba rakhne waloN ki himmatafzai hogi.
shukria
Khulooskesh
Mahtab Qadr

aadaab, dosto! aap sab ko naye saal kii mubaarak.baad! is mahfil meN merii pahlii pesh.kash haazir-e-Khidmat hai. mulaahiza farmaaiye, aur apnii raae se navaaziye. Ghazal jis shaKhs ko Khudii ne jhaNjhoRaa hai, dosto! vo jo bhii kar dikhaaye so thoRaa hai, dosto! us hii pe khul sakaa hai faqat raaz...

Azeezi Saatiyoon (Khas kar Urdustaaniyoo.n ) Aadaab-o-tasleemat, Tiger ke invitation per jub yahaan tashreef lahe tu kyaa daikHte hain ke poora ka poora Urdustan yahaan maujood hai. So hum baghair kisee formality ke baqahidaa iss bazm mein shamooliyaat kee ibitdaa karte hain ummeed hai ke hamain ha...

Bradaram Zia sahib
choti bahar mai bahut sada si zaban mai
aik achi koshsih irsaal farmaane ka shukria..

Naheed sahiba
Bahut khoob bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai.
shukria
MQ

wah bhai zia baloch sahib , aapki ghazal ab nikhar aai hai. bahut umday sher haiN mashallah. daad qubool kijye. albatta in do sheroN ko mulahiza kareiN ,No. 5 dosra misre ke arkaan ziada ho gaye haiN, 6No. mai pahle misre mai ghaleban typo se zia se qabl ek lafz choot gya hai. agar bura lagay to bat...

Zia bhai walaikum salaam aapki ye ghazal parhi , is nai bazm mai , nai shuraat, naya andaaz pasand aaya. 1. Yeh gumaaN, jo k tire dil maiN utar saktaa hai Yeh gul-e-ishq ko bhi, pal maiN katar saktaa hai is sher ka pahla mirsa theek hai laikin dosre misray mai wazan aur , katar sakna kuch samajh mai...

mohatram A.Nazir sahib
aapka kalaam phir aapka kalaam hai, jis mai hameiN kia kalaam ho sakta hai.:) saada laikin bauhut dilchasp aur khoobsurat ghazal irshaad farmai hai aapne , behad pasand ai.
shukriaM.Q

beKhvaab sa'ato.n kaa parastaar kaun hai itanii udaas raat me.n bedaar kaun hai kis ko ye fiqr ke qabiile ko kyaa huaa sab is pe la.D rahe hai.n ki saradaar kaun hai diivaar par sajaa to diye baaGiyo.n ke sar ab ye bhii dekh lo ki pas-e-diivaar kaun hai sab kashtiyaa.N jalaa ke chale saahilo.n se ha...