Janab Hassan Bashir Saahib, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye daad aur mubaarkbaad qubool farmaayiye. bohat shukriya (1- kuch log is tarah se jeevan guzaarte haiN jaise ke jee ke jag pe ehsaaN utaarte haiN ) Aapke is maTleA ke doosre miSreA meiN "jag pe ehsaaN ut...

wah bahut khoob ..hassan aap ki ye tarahi ghazal pe bahut pasand aayi...quoted ashaar zyaada pasand aaye..daad haazir hai..qubool karo :grin: zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada, Shumaila humesha ki tarah is dafaa bhi aap ka behad mamnoon hooN ki aap ne tashreef laa kar nachiz ki hoNslaa afzaaYee farmaaYee aur...

wahh wahh jawaid saaHib kyaa khub ash'aar nikaale haiN saare ke saare ash'aar khub hai matlaa behad pasaNd aaya

is khubsurat kalaam ke liiYe meri jaanib se daad qubul farmaayeN.


Dua'a-go

Hassan

duniyaa maiN eik shakhs bhi aisaa milaa nahiN
jis se jahaaN koee huee ho khataa nahin



Note:
Pahlaa Harf "daal" nahiN balkeh "Daal" hounaa chaahiye jaise "Dhaal" meiN.

Assalam-o-alaikum, Guz #10 pe ki gaee adnaa sii kavish pesh-e-khidmat hai apni raaYe se zaroor navaazeN. 1- kuch log is tarah se jeevan guzaarte haiN jaise ke jee ke jag pe ehsaaN utaarte haiN 2- hairat se aaYeene bhee un ko nihaarte haiN "tan tan ke jab woh apnaa seenah ubhaarte haiN" 3-...

Aadab, zehano.n me.n Khayaal jal rahe hai.n socho.n ke alaav-se lage hai.n duniyaa kii girift me.n hai.n saaye ham apanaa vujuud Dhuu.NDhate hai.n ab bhuukh se ko_ii kyaa maregaa manDii me.n zamiir bik rahe hai.n maazii me.n to sirf dil dukhate the is daur me.n zehan bhii dukhe hai.n sir kaaTate th...

Aadab, kis ko qaatil mai.n kahuu.N kis ko masiihaa samajhuu.N sab yahaa.N dost hii baiThe hai.n kise kyaa samajhuu.N vo bhii kyaa din the kii har vaham yaqii.n hotaa thaa ab haqiiqat nazar aaye to use kyaa samajhuu.N dil jo TuuTaa to ka_ii haath duaa ko uThe aise maahaul me.n ab kis ko paraayaa sam...

Aadab, gul teraa rang churaa laaye hai.n gul_zaaro.n me.n jal rahaa huu.N bharii barasaat kii bauchhaaro.n me.n mujh se kataraa ke nikal jaa magar ai jaan-e-hayaa dil kii lau dekh rahaa huu.N tere ruKhasaaro.n me.n husn-e-begaanaa-e-ehasaas-e-jamaal achchhaa hai Gunche khilate hai.n to bik jaate ha...

Aadab, ab tak to nuur-o-niKhat-o-rang-o-sadaa kahuu.N mai.n tujh ko chhuu sakuu.N to Khudaa jaane kyaa kahuu.N lafzo.n se un ko pyaar hai mafhuum se mujhe vo gul kahe.n jise mai.n teraa naqsh-e-paa kahuu.N ab justajuu hai terii jafaa ke javaaz kii jii chaahataa hai tujh ko vafaa aashnaa kahuu.N sir...