wah bahut khoob rehana jee..hamari jaanib se bhi daad qubool karein is khoobsurat ghazal pe!:)

shumaila

bard wrote:
Magar kuch rehnumae chaeyay the . `karaudoN` say ap ke murad koraidna hay?

KAROUDON=CRORES

Sunna hay kay wo mere ghar aa rahe hain Na pane pay maqsood ham pa rahe hain ahem ahem achha :wink: Ba uz o sharaf aj bulwa rahe hain Takalaf ye keyon ap farma rahe hain aaiye tab bataate haiN :twisted: "muHabbat meN yeh kiya maqaam aa rahe haiN" Kay khud ko ganwan kay tujhe pa rahe hain ...

wah bahut khoob..ye ghazal bhi khoob hai....daad pesh hai...!!!

wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahut umda ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne Jawaid sahab...beech mein aap bahut aamiyaana ghazleiN likhne lage the magar is ghazal se aap wapis form mein aa gaye hain..beintehaa khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne...bahut pasand aayi..har sher qaabil-e-taareef..daad aur mubarakbaa...

Adaab Bard jee...Sab se pehle to aap ka bahut sukriya jo aapne hamare kehne pe is tarahi misre pe ghazal likhi aur khoob likhi,,,guzaarish hai ke aap ROMAN mein bhi ghazal post kar dein taakeh hum sheron ko quote karke apni raaye de sakein..shukriya...aur han khushaamadeed bzm mein:)

moHtarmah Shumailah saHibah aadaab! :-) aap kee Ghazal dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee. maashAllah baRee kamyaab koshish hai. kiya hee achch~a ho keh agar aap isee t^arH meHfil meN tashreef latee raheeN aor hameeN apne dilkash kalam se nawaaztee raheeN. meree dua'a hai. keh Allah aap ke Z^aor-e-Qalam ko ...

SHUMAILA JEE, aap ki ghazal ka ta-accur to achchchaa thaa hi. tabSiraa par jawab bhi kuch kam naheeN hai :-). aap ki tamaam wazaHateiN khoob haiN. aap ne ye bataa kar ke is beHr meiN pehlay runk ki jagaa fa'ilaatun bhi ist'emaal kiyaa ja saktaa hai. marie ilm mieN izaafa kiyaa hai. jis ke leeaye me...

bahut khoob khawar sahab..waqaii maine bhi dekha ke is zameen mein likhna utna asaan nahi hai jitna ye dikh raha hai aasaan...magar aap sab ki ghazlein dkeh ke dil khush ho gaya..sab ne accha likha hai..aapki bhi ghazal pasand aayi khaaskar girah khoob hai..dili daad pesh hai...!!:)


shumaila

wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sara jee..bahut khoob..balki bahut hi khoob.......itni pyaari aur rawaan dawaan ghazla kahi hai aapne ..mazaa aa gaya parhke..wah...daad pesh hai sara sis...!!!:)

shumaila

wah muzaffar sahab wah...bade din baad aapki koi ghazal nazar se guzri jiska lutf hum bhi uThaa sake warna ab tak aap itni saqeel urdu mein ghazlein keh rahe the ke hum to sar dhunte hi reh jaate the...samajh hi nahi aate the ashaar aur isliye daad bhi nahi de paati thi...jiske liye main bahut shar...

wah muzaffar sahab wah...bade din baad aapki koi ghazal nazar se guzri jiska lutf hum bhi uThaa sake warna ab tak aap itni saqeel urdu mein ghazlein keh rahe the ke hum to sar dhunte hi reh jaate the...samajh hi nahi aate the ashaar aur isliye daad bhi nahi de paati thi...jiske liye main bahut sharm...

Salam haamid sahab...hasb-e-maamool aap ka ye kalaam bhi khoob hai...daad pesh hai!

jazakaaAllah!