zamane pe woh Tunz farma rahe haiN ishare hamaree taraf aa rahe haiN hameN dekh kar aap sharma rahe haiN “mohabbat meN yeh kya maqam aa rahe haiN” yeh duniya nahiN ik saraaye hai logo kaii aa rahe haiN kaii jaa rahe haiN kabhee ab nah lauTeNge muflis ke ghar tak jo zewar mahajan ke ghar ja rahe hai...

itna sab kuch log keh chuke hain ke main aur kya kahoon..bas itna kahungi ke mujhe aapke ye ashaar bahut pasand aaye..daad pesh hai khawar sahab.. 2. hawaa jo sharat karay un se koi woh aanchal meiN apni hawaa bandhtay haiN 5. hameiN dijiaye 'ehdo o peemaan saaray abhi un pe taar e wafaa bandhtay ha...

jazakaAllah!

meri bikhri hui hastii ko ikhathTaa karne koi aa jaaye kahiN se mujhe poora karne! 'raat aayee hai mire Gham meiN izaafaa karne' mujhko tanhaaiyoN meiN aur bhi tanhaa karne bewafaayi ka tum aaye ho khulaasah karne? ya ke aaye ho faqat koi tamashaa karne?! phir chale uski wafaaoN pe bharosaa karne G...

Azeezah Shummu SaaHibah, aadaab aur doa MaiN ne aap ki Ghazal per tabsarah kiya tha magar bohat see "typo" ki GhaltiyaaN Khud mujhse ho gaii theeN mujhe yeh bhi Khadsha tha kahiN mere e'traazaat nagawaar.e Khaatir nah ho jayeN. MaiN aap ki ya kisee ki dilshikanee nahiN chaahta hooN. Iss l...

:salaam: Shumail Sahiba Ghazal par meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye. Yeh sheir zyada pasand ayaa: pehle to dil ko mire choRha tha zakhmi karke aur ab aaya hai woh kaar-e-maseehaa karne! Shukria ws aur bahut bahut shukriya Salem sahab...aapki daad aur mubarakbaad sar aankhon pe...aapko woh sh...

Salam Shumaila Ji, iss se pehlay ke koi sukhan shanas aap ki ghazal par izhar e raa-aye karay, mujhe ijaazat dijiaye ke meiN apni fazool si raa-aye se aap ki ghazal ke bakhiaye udhaiR sakooN.[/quote w'salaam khawar sahab ..arey bilajhijhak mere kalaam pe aap apni raaye de diya kijiye...hum inshalla...

wah bahut umda..bahut khoob...rawaani bhi khoob hai aur sheron mein shiddat bhi khoob hai..bahut pasand aaya aapka kalaam Akif jee..khaaaskar ye line bahut acchi lagi.."dil ka jo mehram bane woh aashnaa koi to ho" wah wah..

daad pesh hai!

Shumaila

Salam hamari jaanib se bhi JIA jee aap ko khushaamadeed..aati rahiyega aur bazm ki raunaq baRhaati rahiyega...

shumaila

Assalam-o-alaikum!

SubhanAllah!bahut khoob... Haamid sahab..aap ki ghazlein waqaii nafs ko jhinjhorh jeti hai....shukriya..


duaoon mein yaad rakhiyega!

Shumaila

Salam humne bhi mehfil-e-sukhan mein diye gaye tarahi misre pe kuch likhne ki jasarat ki hai..ghazal saada si hai....ummeed hai kisi laayaq lagegi.. :-) aap sab ki aara ki muntazir :rose meri bikhri hui hastii ko ikhathTaa karne koi aa jaaye kahiN se mujhe poora karne! 'raat aayee hai mire Gham meiN...

3. main yeh samjhee keh moHabbat ki kashish laayee hai
woh mire pahlu meN aaye thEy dikhawa karne

wah sara sis wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..is sher ne to jaan le li...bahut hi khoob..saari daad pesh hai is sher pe... rose:

shumaila

1. Faqat shauq e janooN meiN khaak aor chhaani naheeN jaati miray dil muj se tairi baat ab maani naheeN jaati wahhhhhhhhh umda matla!!!!! 2. hoee poori kabhi na aarzoo koi magar phir bhi shab e gham aarzo-oaN ki farawaani naheeN jaati acchi giraah hai! 3. kabhi mojoaN ne aa kar josh meiN rondaa* th...