ha ha ha bahut khoob zia bahut khoob..mazaa aa gaya..pehli dafa mein hi itna kamaal likha hai..mizaah bharpoor hai... daad pesh hai..ummeed hai aayenda bhi aise hi mazaahiya ghazlon se humein lutfandoz hone ka mauqa doge

salam aur hamari jaanib se bhi KHUSHAAMADEED waseem sahab:)

1. daastaan ishq ko jab mukhtaSar us ne kiyaa maiN ne yeh samjhaa mujhe be baal o par us ne kiyaa 2. aaye din jo chal rahe the saath banke rahnuma aagayeiN jab manzilein tou dar-ba-dar us ne kiyaa 4. hougaya berang aanchal aankh ka kaajal gaya soz-e-gham de kar mujhe daryoozah gar us ne kiyaa 6. aa...

khushaamadeed!!

wah bahut accha khayaal kalaamband kiya hai aapne..waqaii qaabil-e-daad hai...!!!!

hai Ghaayal aaj asmat ka parinda hayaa daaman saNbhaale ro rahi hai! wahhhh..bahut accha sher hai...! maiN shikasta us ke kandhoN paR paRa hoon zindagi bojh mera Dhoo rahi hai! wah wah bahut khoob kaha! udhar titli ke par jalne lage haiN idhar ummeed be rang ho rahi hai ye sher samjhaa denge to hum...

bahut khoob..!

mareeZ^-e-i'shq par pal meN qiyaamat kaa guZar jaanaa! :sirhaane se kisee kaa uTh keh woh pich`le pahar jaanaa!: ("Jigar" Muradabadi) ilaahee! ham GhareeboN kee hee kyoN yeh aazmaa,ish hai? dawaa kaa be-acar rehnaa, du,a'a kaa be-acar jaanaa tabassum zer-e-lab teraa daleel-e-SubH-e-jaan-o...

gham se bahal rahe hai.n aap aap bahut ajiib hai.n
dard me.n Dhal rahe hai.n aap aap bahut ajiib hai.n

saaqi khumaar-e-ishq ke baa'is hooN be.qaraar
varna nasha to tha nahiN teri sharaab meiN

gham-e-furqat ka shikva karne vaali
miri maujoodgi meiN so rahi hai

aaj ke daur meiN ai dost ye maNzar kyuN hai?
zaKhm har sar pe har ik haath meiN patthar kyuN hai?

zaKhm/hai

tum nahi ,gham nahi ,sharaab nahi
aisi tanhaai ka jawaab nahi