wowwwwwwwwwwwwww beatifulllllllllll ghazal....SARA jee aapka intekhaab aur desigining dono bahut pasand aayi....aakhri sher mein lafz ALBUM hai??

Shukriya sara jee..aap ki jaanib se zamaane baad daad wusool hui hai..dil khush ho gaya.....waqaii is baar bahut lambe gap ke baad ghazal kahi thi.......aap ko pasand aayi jaankar khushi hui..shukriya !!:)

Salam haamid jee...hasb-e-m'aamol bahut hi fikrangez tehreer hai aapki.....hum aapki soch ko daad dete hain.... :)

Allah hum sab ko kehne sunne se zyaada amal ki taufeeq ata farmaaye..Ameen!

shareek-e-bazm dil bhii haiN, chiraagh bhi haiN, phool bhii
magar jo jaan-e-anjuman tha woh kahaN chalaa gaya


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Salam, Sanpolia wahid hay iss ki jama kia hay?sanp kay bachon ko kiya kehtay hain?Waisse tu Urdu grammer mein aisse he jama banate hain. `Har eik baat` wahid hay ya jama?Har tu hamesha eik say ziyada kay leye hota hay jaisse har insan ya har bacha Phir shayed hai ghalat ho jis ko shaira ne hain he ...

Azeezah Shummu, PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, MULAAHIZAAT: Aam Taur per maiN aek martabah tabSirah karne ke baAd dobaarah beHc o mubaaHice meiN nahiN paRhnaa chaahtaa taakeh ikhtilaaf kee khaleej waseeA nah houjaaye. Lekin aap ne apne maTleA ke baare meiN yeh likhkhaa hei: woh jo kabhi shareek the pursaan...

Azeezah Shummu , PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, :-) Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. [/color] Salaam-o-Adaab Nazir bhai..bahut shukriya ke itni mistakes ke bawajood meri ghazal aap ko pasand aayi...aap waqaii hausla afzaayi farmaana jaante hain .....

Anmol wrote:Come on, sharminda mat ho. Just concentrate on your poetry and take time to revise it.

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han maine revise ki hai ghazal..ab dekho....maine edit ki hai ...

2, dushmanoN se kiya karte ham gilah a'dawat ka? dostooN ne luTee hai aabru gulistaaN kee. 4, qiSSah kiya sunaeeN ham talkhiee-e-zamanah ka? khooN rula gaee ham ko be basee musalmaaN kee. 5, aadmee ke marne se aarzu naheeN miTtee roH bh~aTaktee rehtee hai a'aashiq-e-pareshaaN kee. 6, saaHilooN peh ...

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oh no ye itni obvious mistake kaise ho gayi mujhse lagta hai waqaii bahut hi jaldi mein ghazal likh Daali is baar... badi sharminda mehsoos ho rahi hai...bahut zyaada mistakes hai is baar kalaam mein

[quote=Anmol [quote=shummu] Salam ahl-e-bazm! :) Aaj ek arse baad apni nayi sanjeeda ghazal post kar rahi hoon...urduduniya ke mushaire ke liye aakhri din mein likhi hai...isliye zyaada waqt na de saki ise..yahan isi ummeed ke saath pesh kar rahi hoon ke aap log meri kami beshiyon ki nishaandehi kar...

Salam ahl-e-bazm! Aaj ek arse baad apni nayi sanjeeda ghazal post kar rahi hoon...urduduniya ke mushaire ke liye aakhri din mein likhi hai...isliye zyaada waqt na de saki ise..yahan isi ummeed ke saath pesh kar rahi hoon ke aap log meri kami beshiyon ki nishaandehi kar dein aur aur apni aara se zaro...

Khud se kyaa dushmani baRh gayi Aap se dousti baRh gayi wah..!! Jab wo meh-rukh houaa hamqadam Raah meiN raushni baRh gayi wah wah wah haasil-e-ghazla sher...!!! besabab wo khafaa hougaye baat kuch bhee nah thee baRh gayi sahi kaha aksar aisa ho jaata hai ke bin baat ke baat bahut barh jaati hai......