WAHHHHHHHHHHH FARAZ sahab ki bahut hi behtareen ghazal aap ne yahan chaspaaN ki hai...kya ash'aar hain..wah...khaaskar 3rd,5th aur 6th sher ke baare mein kya hi kehna...bahut bahut shukriya Raheel sahab share karne ka :)
Shumaila
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- Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:22 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Asaatizah O Gauhar-e-Naayaab
- Topic: QurbatoN Main Bhee....Ahmed Faraz
- Replies: 3
- Views: 564
- Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:14 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
- Replies: 26
- Views: 2726
Re: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
Mahtab sahab ADAAB!Mahtab Qadr wrote: shummu ji adaab
ghazal bahut khoobsurat aur aik gahri sachaioN ki akkasi kar rahi hai vo sachaiyaN jisay aik shayer ziada samajh sakta hai. bahut khoob.
Ghazal ko pasand farmaane ka aur itni khoobsurat daad se nawaazne ka dili shukriya qubool farmaayeiN :)
Shumaila
- Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:10 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
- Replies: 26
- Views: 2726
Re: Bahut Khoob Waah Waah
S H U M M U Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Saare ashAar khoob heiN aur khaas Taur per ye ashAar: bhalaa baat kab thi ye ik raat ki k har shab hi nainoN ne barsaat ki faqat baat kii thii musaawaat ki na thii baat woh ikhtilaafaat ki na ho shaad mujh ko yuN khush dekh kar khus...
- Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:03 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!
- Replies: 962
- Views: 75608
- Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:45 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
- Replies: 26
- Views: 2726
Re: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
salaam moHtaramah Shumaai'la saaHiba, aapkii taaza_ba_taaza Ghazal paRhii aur bas maiN angusht_ba_dandaaN rah gayaa aur bas muNh se waah waah be_iKhtiyaar nikal paRaa. Hairaangii is baat kii ki kia koii itnii aasaan zabaan se itnii behtareen bayaan bhi klar saktaa hai. bahot Khoob Shmaai'la saaHiba...
- Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:37 pm
- Forum: Moshaairah
- Topic: tum se shayad koiee sawaal na hou...Guzarish # 1
- Replies: 16
- Views: 1510
Re: tum se shayad koiee sawaal na hou...Guzarish # 1
3. baat dilki jo tum karo mujhse zindagi ka safar muhaal na ho 4. aankh se jazb karliye aansoo taakeh mujh se koiee sawaal na ho 5. saath tera hai isqadar piyaaraa hai tamanna ise zawaal na ho 6. yun guzar jaayeN roz o shab apne zindagaani kabhii vabaal na ho Wah sara jee ..bahut khoob!Aap ki tarah...
- Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:21 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: AasmaN per mujhe ay chand bulataa kiyuN hei: Abdullah Nazir
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1623
Re: AasmaN per mujhe ay chand bulataa kiyuN hei: Abdullah Na
1)AasmaaN per mujhe ay chaand bulaataa kiyuN hei Mujh se naalaaN hei tou phir sir pah biThaataa kiyuN hei 3)Chaahne waale ke dil meiN hei Thikaanah teraa usi kaAbeh ke dar o baam giraataa kiyuN hei 5) Bhool jaanaa hei agar waAdah o paimaaN apne meri her baat mujhe yaad dilaataa kiyuN hei 7)Shookhiy...
- Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:01 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: Nasha badan mai utarta sharaab lafzoN ka
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1261
- Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:42 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
- Replies: 26
- Views: 2726
shummu ji salamzz neheyaat asaan say alfaaz ko nehayat umdagi say sheroon ki larree main pro ker aap nay nehayat khubsoorat ghazal takhleeq kee hay aur bila shuba qabl e daad hay .. buhut umdaa .. share kernay ka bay had shukria,, waqar masood W'salaam Waqar sahab! Ghazal ki itne khoobsurat alfaaz ...
- Mon Jan 10, 2005 7:49 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
- Replies: 26
- Views: 2726
ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki
Salaam! Ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai...ummeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi! :) Arz kiya hai... ROMAN VERSION ajab raat hai ye tilismaat ki zameeN aasmaaN ne mulaqaat ki sunaa raat jab hai inaayaat ki sitaaroN ne shab bhar munaajaat ki bhalaa baat kab thi ye ik raat ki k har shab hi nainoN ne b...
- Mon Jan 10, 2005 7:42 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: Khafaa kioN ho gayaa itnaa jehN se?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 769
Wah Tahira jee waqaii bahut hi khoob...asal likhna to ise hi kehte hain jo roz marra ki zindagi mein hone waale waaqiye/haadsaath pe likha jaaye...bahut hasb-e-haal ghazal kahi hai aapne...aap ke jazbe ki qadr karte hue meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaayein! Allah hum sab ko apni hifazat mein rakhe....
- Mon Jan 10, 2005 12:14 pm
- Forum: Khushamdeed/Taarruf
- Topic: Khushamdeed tariq Mehmood saahib
- Replies: 5
- Views: 329
- Sat Jan 08, 2005 10:55 am
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
- Topic: abhi kuch log haiN uspaar meray
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1374
Re: abhi kuch log haiN uspaar meray
badaltay maosamoN ke saath badlay vo jo ahbaab thay dochaar meray koi to lay sabaq in zalzaloN say bharay haiN shahr ke akhbar meray banaya hai makaN donoN ne milkar zameeN unki dar o deewar meray Wah!!! Bahut khoob Sarfaraz sahab....ye ash'aar bahut umda hain..daad haazir hai :) Shumaila
- Fri Jan 07, 2005 1:00 pm
- Forum: Kalaam-e-Asaatizah O Gauhar-e-Naayaab
- Topic: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN TajMahal ho jaise....!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 518
- Fri Jan 07, 2005 12:53 pm
- Forum: Anjuman
- Topic: Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!
- Replies: 962
- Views: 75608