Sab se pehle to khushaamadeed ramishjee...aur phir mu'aazarat itni der se aapki tehreer dekhne ke liye....asl mein aajkal ramzaan mein masroofiyat itni hai ke zyaada aana nahi ho paata isliye shayad baaqi membraan bhi kam kam nazar aa rahe hain... aapne bahut hi hasas ghazal likhi hai aur aap ke ek ...

niichii aaNkhoN meiN kuChh tabassum saa,
shoKh hai? sharam saar hai? kya hai?

wah..bahut khoob..!

3. ye bijliyon ki garaj aur siyaah tanhaa raat bataauN kyaa jo mire dil kaa Haal houtaa hei wah..! 4. tiri wafaa ke yahaN phool ab khileN nah khileN jafaa ki dhoop meiN bhi iHtimaal houtaa hei iHtimaal=? 6. kabhi jo aapke tewar zaraa badalte heiN khabar kise hei jo Saara kaa Haal houtaa hei wah bah...

log mulzim to samajhtay mujhay meray munsif
waqia koi to ilzaam say pehlay aata

sahi kaha...wah..bahut khoob..

Zindagi meiN khanjar-e-jaur o sitam kab tak
Ab acar hougaa nah tere vaar kaa mujh per

ahl-e-khaanah ke liye hooN baar ab yaaro
boujh thaa saaraa kabhi ghar-baar kaa mujh per



wah bahut khoob Nazir bhai....!! rose:

shumaila

koshish yahi rehti hain sab ko paRhoon magar kambhakht waqt ki qillat maar deti hai..waise jo kalaam mujhe pasand aata hai use daad zaroor deti hoon:-)

Daanish wrote:
agla 'emoticon':

:x

dil bhi paagal hai ke us shakhs se vaabasta hai
kisi aur ka hone de na apnaa rakhe

next:

laakh hoNton pe muskuraahaT ki kiran raqsaaN ho
dukh to phir dukh hai chehre se numaayaaN hoga

laakh hoNton pe muskuraahaT ki kiran raqsaaN ho
dukh to phir dukh hai chehre se numaayaaN hoga

next:

shukriya daanish jee... ab lage haathon ek emoticon bhi de dete taakh hum bhi sher sunaate hue silsile ko aage barhaate... :)

Salam ahl-e-bazm..ek naye silsile ka aaGhaaz kar rahi hoon is ummeed ke saath ek aap sab is meiN baRhchaRh ke hissa lenge aur ise kaamyaab banaane meiN hamari madad karenge :-) Is mein karna ye hai ki ek member koi emoticon dega(yahan se ya bahar se le sakta hai) aur uspe next member ko sher likhna ...

zaalim thaa vo aur zulm kii aadat bhii bohut thii
majboor the ham,us se muhabbat bhii bohut thii