ik mohabbat ke ivaz arz-o-samaaN de dooN ga
tujh se kaafir ko to maiN apna khudaa de dooN ga

tujh / ga

kyuN gardish-e-mudaam se ghabraa na jaaye dil
insaan hooN pyaala-o-saaghar nahiN hooN maiN

insaan / maiN

kabhi gul se shabnam Tapakte jo dekhi
mujhe qatra-e-chashm-e-tar yaad aaya

Mahtab bhai aur moHtaram Nazir saHib assalam-o-alaikum maiN aap dono ka bahot mamnoon hooN ke aap ne is baare meiN meri rehnumaai farmaai. dar.asl mujhe jo bhi baat samajh na aaye to maiN apni tashveesh ka izhaar kar deta hooN, aur isi vajah se bahot kuch seekhne ko milta hai. agar maiN Mahtab bhai ...

vaah, shummu aap ne mera pasandeeda she'r pesh kiya hai

arz kiya hai:

nahin nahin ye khabar dushmanoN ne di hogi
wo aaye aa ke chale bhi gaye mile bhi nahin

wo / nahin

Sahil saHib

janaab aap ki ye ghazal to pehle hi paRh li thi ,magar waqt per javaab na de sakaa, dar.asl main ye samajhta rahaa ke main aap ko muraqqa-e-daad-o-sitaaish pesh kar chuka hooN :)

lijiye, ab daad qubool kareN itni umda kawish per

amjad

zahida sahiba:

ghalib ki zameen meiN aap ne umda ghazal likhi hai , lutf aaya paRh ker

meri jaanib se daad aur mubarak.baad qubool farmaaiN

amjad

hai mujh per taa'na zan khud mera aHsaas
tamanna apni qeemat ko rahi hai

tamanna / hai

rahaa ghar koii taa qayaamat salaamat
phir ik roz marna hai hazrat salaamat

phir / salaamat

Mahtab Qadr bhai: assalam-o-alaikum vaah janaab khoob ghazal sunaai aap ne. acha andaaz hai aap ka Ilm o fun ke sayebaaN jaanay lagay karwaaN ke karwaaN jaanay lagay matla khoob hai, daad qubool kijiye dhoop sahraaoN ki itni barh gaayi tayeraan e khusbayaN jaanay lagay khoob kahaa barkateiN dastar k...

tum maah-e-shab-e-chaar dahum the mere ghar ke
kyuN phir na rahaa ghar ka wo naqsha koii din aur

kyuN / aur

nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultaani ke gunbad per
tu shaaheeN hai basera ker pahaaRoN ki chaTTaanoN meiN

tu / meiN

qayaamat yaqeenan qareeb aa rahi hai
khumar ab to masjid meiN jaane lage haiN

khumar / haiN

nahin ke mujh ko qayaamat ka ai'tiqaad nahiN
shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jazaa zyaad nahiN

shab / nahiN

abhi abhi tumheN socha to kuch na yaad aaya
abhi abhi ham ik doosre se bichRe the

A.N.Qasmi

abhi / the