de

de wo jis qadar zillat ham hansi meiN TaaleN ge
baare aashna nikla , unka paasbaaN apna

ghalib

rahe saath tiraa pyaar zindagi ban kar
ye aur baat meri zindagi vafaa na kare

khaamushi keh rahi hai kaan meiN kiya
aa rahaa hai mire gumaan meiN kiya?

aur

aur baazaar se le aaye agar TooT gayaa
saaghar-e-jam se miraa jam-e-sifaal acha hai

mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujh ko
mire Toote hue dil ke ye dard angeiz naale haiN

mire yaa haiN

Naheed saHiba: salaam arz hai: aaj hi aap ki ye umda ghazal nazar navaaz hui :) jaisa ke maiN hamesha kehta hooN ke aap ka apna aik makhsoos andaaz-e-bayaaN hai, jo ke qaari per gehra asar Daalta hai . mujhe aap ki poori ghazal bahot pasand aayee hai, magar kuch baateN meHz izhaar-e-khayaal ke liye ...

Hashmat saHib:

salaam arz hai:

janaab kamaal ki ghazal kahii hai aap ne :), maashallah tamaam ashaar hi khoob haiN, is ghazal per kiya tanqeed karooN ;, bas daad hazir hai , qubool farmaa leN :)

amjad

Hashmat saHib, aur deegar membraan-e-bazm: maiN dil ki gehraaioN se aap sab ka mamnoon-o-mutashakkir hooN ke aap ne is taraH mera khair.maqdam kiya, aur mujh khush.aamdeed kahaa :) aap sab ka bahot bahot shukria inshallah ye bazm meiN zabaan-e-urdu ki khidmat karne meiN aham kirdaar adaa kare gi Ria...

Assalam-o-alaikum

mashallah Hashmat bhai, aap ki tashreeh aur tabsira bahot pasand aaya :)

amjad