سلام اس ذات پر زخمی دلوں ''کی'' جو کہ مرھم ہے

صدا دل سے آنے لگی یہ مسلسل
محمد محمد محمد محمد محمد ﷺ

واہ واہ۔ سبحان اللہ بہت خوب۔

ماشااللہ

ماشا اللہ

کیا بات ہے تنویر پھول صاحب۔

meN ne samjhaa ke chaandni phaili
phool.......................

bohat khoob.

Salam árz hai Muzaffar bhai, leejiaye bhagaRa Haazir hai. kuch likhne ka progrm to na thaa laikin Hasan SaHeb ki ghazal par likhna paRa so pakRa gyaa. kahiye kaise heN aap? ab aap ki ghazal ki kyaa tareef karooN, bas khaaish hi hai ke kabhi aap se miSra keh sakoooN :). bohat daad qubook kijiaye. aor...

Salam Jawaid SaHeb, ghazal ki majmoo' taacur bohat shaandaar hai. aor ashaar ka infiradi acar ye hai, zameer unka nahiN raha hai mujhe yehee sub bata rahe haiN tou jurm karne se qabl unke yeh paaoN kyuun Dagmaga rahe haiN---------------------bohat khoob. muSeebatoN meN jo dostoN ke daroN pe hum khaT...

Muzaffar bhai, jab se bandhan par aa rahaa hooN aap ki aisi mukhtaSir ghazal kabhi na daikhi, andaaza hotaa hai k aap bohat maSroof heN. laikin ye gham e duniyaa bhalaa aap ko sher kehne se kaise roktaa. so phir bhi aap ne chand ashaar keh hi diaye. 1, mire khun-e-Aarzu ko woh baha baha ke roey mira...

Mohtaram janab Jawaid SaHeb, aap ki ghazal ki badaloat bohat se 'aroozi nikaat bhi seekh chukaa hooN. to sochaa kyooN na is par kuch raa-aye bhi day di jaa-aye. mairi koi baat naagwaar lage to paishgi ma'ziraat. kuch tajaaveez bhi hoN gi. jin ka maqSad aap se Sirf ye poochna hai k kyaa meN saHeeH sa...

Mohtaram Janab SARWAR SaHeb, aap jaante heN k aap se seekhne ka koi moqa' meN haath se nahi jaane daitaa. so yahaaN bhi Haazir ho gyaa hooN. meN samajhne se qaaSir hooN ke Jawaid SaHeb ka miSra kaise wazn se baahir hai. meN aap k hi ki-aye tukRay neechay lagaa rahaa hoooN. kha----nDar-----saa----ho;...

Salam Farhan bhai, aap ke likhte heN, Khawar Bhai,,, Salaam o RaHmat,,, ummid hai mizaaj.girami ba.khair hoNge. 1) Khiyaal yaQeenan saadah hai.aityaraaf karata hooN. aap nay likha{doosra miSra bebeHr lag rahaa hai.} mujhay to nahin laga. bara.e.mahrbani nashaandahi farmayeN to mamnoon rahoonga. 2){k...

Farhan bhai, roz hooN aap ki dua-oN meN ab mujhe ye yaqeen hotaa hai. chaliaye aate heN aap ki ghazal ki taraf, 1} rah.e.zindagii meiN akcer, gam utha utha kay roye. sabhi naQsh.e.arzoo dil say mita mita kay roye.---------------------------------------------------------khayaal bohat saada hai. doosr...

Sohail bhai,

mujhe to turbo lagaana bilkul theek hai lagaa hai. kyooN k yahaaN kuch oar nahi lag saktaa [:)]


mukhliS

Sohail bhai, Zabardast, aap jaante hi heN hameN usi zuban meN baat karne ko tarjeeH daine chahhiaye jo dosroN ko samajh aati hai. mushkil ashaar likh kar baRa shair to banaa jaa sakti hai. laikin shayed mufeed shair nahi. aap ki ghazal mujhe bohat pasand aaii- jo ba maqSad bhi hai His e jaamal ki bh...