Salam Rizwan Sb, aik khoobSoorat ghazal par mabarikbaad qabool keejiaye. Ghazal bohat pasand aai, khas toar par matla'A aor ye walaa sha'er, wahan ab kaunsa mausam bahareN leke ayega jahan sookhe darakhton ko bhi saya daar likkha hai haan maqtaA meiN mujhe lagaa jaise faa-il ghaaib hai. yani kiss ne ...

Salam Dosto, Tabsira ke leeaye aik ghazal paish kar rahaa hooN. aor aap ki mohabbat ka paishgi shukarguzaar hooN. choonke abhi sha'iri meiN nauwarid he hooN iss leeaye aap ka tabSiraa maire leeaye bohat mufeed ho gaa. khaaS tor par un alfaaz, tarakeeb, bayaanat ki baat zaroor kijiaye ga jo aap ...

Mohtaram Haamid baaqri sb, is bazm meiN maiN khud ko aik "laadle" ki haciat meiN daikhtaa hooN. laadla iss taraH ke hooN to sub se chhotaa (ilmi a'etbaar se) magar phir bhi doosre ke kalaam par apne taSSuraat baghair kissi jhijhak ke paish kar daitaa hooN. umeed hai aap bhi dar guzar farmaa-aiN ge ...

Salam Haamid baaqri Sb, Allah taalaa aap par apni rehmatoaN aor naimatoaN ki baarish kartaa hi chalaa ja-aye. bohat khoobsoorat kalam likhaa hai aap ne. aik do batoaN ki wazahat agar naa cheez ke leeaye kar daiN to shukar guzaar hooN ga. aao guzaare.n zindagi 'ezzat say pyaar say karbobala yeh kehti ...

Saraa ji,

aap kaa shukriyaa.

Dua'go,
Muhammad Khawar.

Muzaffar Sb, Jis faraakhdili se aap doosroaN ki Hoslaa afzaayi farmateiN haiN woah aap hi ka Turaa imtiaaz hai. maire maqtA ki hasiat aap ki ghazal ke khoobsoorat chehray par aik til se ziada naheeN hai. jo kissi ko khoobSoorat lag saktaa hai aor kissi ko bad numaa. aap ki baat par aitebaar kartaa ...

Janab Muzaffar Sb, aap ki shaa'iri hameshaa hi bohat pasand aati hai aor paRh kar khushi hoti hai. Allah taa'aala aap ko iss se bhi ziaaada nawazay. hasb e aadaat apne taaSurraat qalamband karne jaa rahaa hooN umeed hai ke aap mairi kam ilmi aor kam fehmi ko dar guzar farmaa-aiN gay. 1. matlA bohat ...

Muzaffar Sb, Gustakhi Mua'aaf, aap ki likhee huwee ghazal(qaSeedaa) haqeeqat par mabni aisi khoobsoorat ghazal hai ke aisaa lagaa jaise apne hi khyaalaat ki tarujmaani ho rahi ho. iss leeaye ghazal ke aakhir meiN aik gustakhi kar baithaa. yaqeenun ye (mairi ghalati) qabil e iSlaaH hai. aap jaisaa ...

Salam Mohtarmi, pehli baar aap ke roo buroo paish ho rahaa hooN. kissi bhi qism ki naa laaiqui k liaye paishgi muazirat Koii maatam, koii kartaa hei charaaghaaN kyaa kyaa Haadice dekhtaa hei deeda-e-HairaaN kyaa kyaa Bohat khoobsoorat matlA hai. purkashish aisaa ke aik dam se saari tawajja kheench ...

Azeezam Saffy sahib, Salam arz hai. pehli baar aap ki mehfil meiN haazir ho rahaa hooN. aap ki ghazal yaqunun bohat khoobsoorat hai. phir pasand apni apni . Mujhe ye ye walaa sha'aer sub se ziadaa pasand aaye. ik baar log phir se dewaane ho rahaiN haiN kehte hain woa dobaraa maSoom ho chukaa hai ...

Muzaffar Sb, aap ka ke mulaahizaat paRh kar khushi hoee. aap ne nehait khooobsoorat alfaaz meiN kuch achhay asbaaq se nawaaza hai. apni pehli post meiN ne maiN ne aik jumla ke izaafa kiaya hai. Jo surkh rang meiN likhaa huwaa hai. agar ho sake tao aik nazar uss par bhi daal leejiaye ga, aap ka ...

Saraa ji, aik do baar on line huwa to daikha ke aap ne baaqi logoaN ko jawab likhaa huwaa hay laikin maire sawalooaN ka jawab nadaarid. aik baar to aisa lagaa jaise aap ne ghussa kar leeaye ho. (iss ka izhaar meiN ne muzaffar sb ki ghazal par tabsira karte huway bhi kiyaa hai. ubb aap ke itnay ...