usaataza e karam! Sarwar sb ki taraf se ye jumlaa Abudllah Nazir sb ke leeaye paRha "aap kee hee t^araH adab-o-she'r kaa ek adnaa t^aalib-e-i'lm hooN aur abhee ghuTniyoN hee chal rahaa hooN!" jaise bijli koondta hai waise hi mere zahn mieN ye misraa aayaa. "ham to doobay haiN sanam tu...

Mein webmaster ki taraf se Alwaysalone oar Rose ko Urdu Bandhan meiN khushamdeed kehtaa hooN.


Aap ka mukhlis,
Muhammad Khawar.

Salam Sir,

1. kia "mahiayaa" likhne ka bhi koi usool hai?
2. Ye shair konsi beHr meiN hai?

waqt k saath yeh azhaan badal jaate heiN
sach tau yeh hai keh insaan badal jaate haiN.

Sir agar aap digital taqteeA farmaa daiN to mujhe bohat aasaani ho gi

aap ka shukarguzaar,
Muhammad Khawar.

Salam Tahiraa ji, Aap ki ghazal paRhne ke baad apne kyalaat qalamband kar rahaa hooN. yaqeenun mera andaaz aap saa mutasir kun naheeN. Laikin phir bhi meiN samajhtaa hooN ke woah sub kuch likhne meiN koi aar naheen jo meiN ne mehsoos keeaye. Aap ki shaAer se ye mera qiaas hai ke aap aik bareek naza...

Salam Tahira Ji :-) Khawara bha'ee nehaayat khoobsurat maZaameen aur andaaz se muzaiyyan ghazal aik murassa ghazal per dilee mubarakbaad khush rehiye aur yuNhi zindigi k husn per likhte rehiye wassalam [/size] Khawara ke saath to aap ko bhai ke baja-aye behan likhna chah-aye thaa. :lol: Ji meiN jaa...

SalaaM Saleem Bhaswar Sb. Mein aap ki daad ke leeaye shukar guzaar hooN. agar aap ko dobara time mile oar aap ye likh sakaiN ke aap ko kahaaN kahaaN par behtari ki gunjaish mumkin hai to meiN shukar guzaar hooN ga. aasaateza ke ra-aye ka bohat muqaam hai. Laikin iss ke saath saath har saathi ki rai ...

BuzargoaN oar DostoaN ki khidmat meiN Salam. aik nayee koshish ke saath haazir khidmat hooN. Qara-eeN jitna ziada meri takhleeq ko kari nazar se daikhaiN ge, umeed kartaa hooN utni hi achchi koshish ke saath dobaarat haazir khidmat hooN ga. aap ka shukarguzar, Muhammad Khawar Ghazal 1. baat maire d...

Farhan Sb.

aap ki khoobsoora ghazal daikh kar khushi hoee.

samajhtay hain,,tirii majbooriyooN ko,
hameeN maloom haiN, tayray bahanay.


aap ka ye shair bohat pasand aaya. daad qabool keejiaye.

Mukhils,
Muhammad Khawar.

Muzaffar Sb,

Aadaab,

aap ka ye shaAer bohat pasand ayaa.

"Haqiqat jaan le to bh~ee maseeHa!

maraZ^ baRh~a diYa teree dawa ne!
"

Allah taala aap ko oar taraqee day.


Mukhlis
Muhammad Khawar.

Sir meiN aap ki itni shaandaar wazaahat ka bay had shukar guzar hooN. oar inteha se ziaada khiffat zada. kyooN ke meiN "misra likhne meiN aik ghalati kar gaya thaa. asal misraa hai, "ik qiamat hai na jaane kab guzr ja-aye." Jo mujhe lagtaa hai ke "faa ilaa tun faa ilaa tun faailu...

Sirs,

iss agar iss misraa ki alaamti taqteeA oar beHr ki maloomat faraham kar di ja-ain to banda shukar guzar ho ga.

"ik qiamat hai najanee guzar ja-aye"

oar kia ye misraa kissi kaabil e zikr shaAer ne isteAmaal kiya hai?

Mein :Internat: ka isteAmaal bohat ziaada kartaa hooN. meri "job" hi kuch aisi hai. iss leeaye jub kuch seekhne ka moqaa aataa hai to :ustaad google: se madaad laitaa hooN. ShaAeri kaa shauq huwaa to kissi dost ke ka shaAery ke fan par kahaa huwa aik lafz "Arooz" yaad aa-gia. bu...

"Achhhi Soorat ko sanwarne ki zaroorat kiya hai
Saadgi mieN bhi qiamat ki adaa hoti hai"

Sara ji aap ka shukriya. agar waqt ne ijaazat di oar koi topic dil ka bhayaa to zaroor likhooN ga.

"aadam ke kissi roop ke tehqeer na karnaa
Phirtaa hai yahaaN khud khudaa bhais badal kar"