FATIMA Saahibah Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki TaraHi ghazal dekhkar bahut khushi houi. Din badin aapka andaaz-e-bayaan nikhartaa jaarahaa hei. bohat bohat shukriya nazir sahib chaand taarey bhi jab rooTh jaaney lagey hum terii yaad sey gher sajaaney lagye MaTlaA her liHaaz se bahut achchaa hei. nava...

aslaam_u_alikam guz#43 per kuch mian ney bhi likha hey. jo aap sa key samney hazir hey. umeed ekrti hun keh aap sab apnii aara sey zaroor nawaazein gey. chaand taarey bhi jab rooTh jaaney lagey hum terii yaad sey gher sajaaney lagye choR ker jab mujhe door jaane lage dermiyaaN faasalon ko bharaaney...

F A T I M A H Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki TaraHi ghazal paRhkar bahut khushi houi ke ab aap ke saare sheAr beHr (vazn) meiN heiN. :P 1 :Zindagi itnii bhi muhaal na ho Her kadam per nayaa vabaal na ho Is maTleA ke pahle aur doosre misreA meiN yooN kahaa gayaa hei: Pahle misreA meiN: zindagi isqadar...

aslaam_u_alikam urdudan per aik misra taraa diya gayaa thaa. main ney bhi us per kuch likhney ki koshish ki hey. ummed kerti hun aap sab apnii kimatii aara sey nawazein gey. Waliakum Assalam Jeeti raho, khush raho, bilkul bilkul ham apnee aaraa naheiN deNge tu aur kaun de gaa :wink: dard-e-dil daai...

aslaam_u_alikam shu tumhaari yeh gazal bohat achi lagii. sabhii ashaar ohat khub kahey hain magar yeh ashaar khush khaas pasand aye. Koi sunta nahiN kisi ki yahaaN Her taraf khaamushi na ho jaaye ! har ghaRii Dar yahii sataata hai ke khushii aarzii na ho jaaye mujh ko Dar hai tumhaari chaahat meiN ...

MuHtaramah FATIMAH Saahibah, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Waah waah Fatimah, kiyaa hii khoobsoorat ghazal paish kii hei aap ne. dard-e-dil daaimii na ho jaaye hijr hi zindagii na ho jaaye Bahut khoob MaTlaH hei lekin maiN is khauf ko nazar meiN rakhte houe aapke liye duAaa karungaa ke aisaa kabhi nah hou...

aslaam_u_alikam urdudan per aik misra taraa diya gayaa thaa. main ney bhi us per kuch likhney ki koshish ki hey. ummed kerti hun aap sab apnii kimatii aara sey nawazein gey. dard-e-dil daaimii na ho jaaye hijr hi zindagii na ho jaaye mujh ko her waqt ye gumaan raha "kahiN vaaiz walii na ho jaa...

1 :Zindagi itnii bhi muhaal na ho Her kadam per nayaa vabaal na ho 3: Is terhan muskaraa key miltey raho Chaahaton ko kabhi zavaal na ho 4: Zindagii bher tumharey saath rahun Duriyun ka koii bhii saal na ho 5: Aankhon main nami labon pey muskaan Meri khushiyun per esaa kaal na ho 6: Phir sey mehkaa...

Anis Hasan wrote:Buhat achi ghazal likhi hai aap nay "Fatimah" saadgi aur khubsurti ka acha namoona daad qabool kijiyay.

aslaam_u_alikam

shukria anis hasan ji

sara_j wrote:qiyaamat hei balaa hei baam per aate hii chup jaanaa

kahaN DhoondooN tujhe aakhir maiN ab kis se patah poochooN

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aslaam_u_alikam

kahan aa ker rukney the rastey kahan mor tha ussey bhool jaa
wo jo mil gayaa ussey yaad rakh jo nahin mila ussey bhool ja


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pb] F A T I M A H, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal paRhkar bahut khushi houi. Saare ashAar ahcche heiN: (((raah veeraan kis liye hai aaj dost anjaan kis liye hai aaj aaj kyuN jhoomti nahin titli gul pareshan kis liye hai aaj chandni bhi lage hai madham si chaand Hairaan kis liye hai aaj kyuN ni...