Na hoga suboot aur shahadat na hogi To phir kya haqeeqat, haqeeqat na hogi waaqai....kitni sachi baat hai ke haq tou phir haq hai ...suboot ho na ho....bohut achay.... Sitam hum kahen aur oonke sitam ko Hamari to aisee jisarat nah hogi waaaahhhhh.....kia kehnay....bohut pasand aaya ye shair....aur i...

MuHtaramah NIGAH Saahibah, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Guzarish No.3 ke misreA per aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut achchi hei, beHad pasand aayi khaaskar ghazal ke aakhiri 5 sheAr. Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Aapka Mukhlis, Nazir. [/b] [/color] Janaab Abdullah Nazir Sahab!! aap jese aala pay...

Assalam alaikum Guzarish # 3 per meri adnaa si koshish haazir hai... muhabbat say jab tak ibaadat na hogi kisi kaam ki ye riyaazat na hogi....!!! lutaai hai Khud zindagi jaan-o-dil say na samjho ke hum maiN faraasat na hogi bhalaa kiuN kahaiN tum say ulfat nahiN hai abb iss maiN tou hum say siyaasat...

Najma Sahiba


bohut Khubsoorat Ghazal paish ki aap nay...tamaam ashaar hi bohut pasand aaye ...Khusoosan aaKhri 3 ashaar bohut hi lajwaab haiN....

meri jaanib say daad qubool kijye


Nigaah

MuHtaramah NIGAH SAHIBAH Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki nazm waaqAii shiddat-e-jazbaat kaa muraqqaA hei. Saare ashAar bahut hii achche heiN her liHaaz se. Sirf aek misreA meiN aek lafz badalne kii zaroorat hei. Aap ne likhkhaa hei: [/size][/color][/i] kisi tarah wujood apna main kho sakti tou acha th...

Naheed Sahiba aap ki Ghazal mujhay pasand aayi ..... aap ki Ghazal per udaasi ki dabeez teh Ghaalib mehsoos hui..... 1)Tire dhyaan ke sooraj bujhe bujhe kyooN heiN Yeh chaar samt andheraoN ke silsile kyooN heiN matlaa bohut Khubsoorat hai....sooraj ka bujhna aur chaar simt andhera ....baRa Khubsoora...

Assalam alaikum Safiya Ji main bhi bazm main aap ko Khush amadeed kehti hooN....aap nay kaha aap ko Urdu thik say bolni ya paRhni nahiN aati ..... lekin is ke bawujood aap ko shairi say ladao hai aur likhti bhi haiN mashaAllah...tou janab!!....muhabbat tou Khud bohut say maraahil aasan kar deti hai....

Ahl-e-Bazm!!

Assalam alaikum


mujhay hairat aur saKht nadaamat hai ke maine ye section aaj tak kiun nahi dekha tha...mujhay andaza hi nahiN tha ke....eeks...Khair...

umeed hai aap sab nazar andaazfarmaaieNgay...

Nigaah

Mohtarma "Nigaah", Aap ki yeh nazm buhat pur asar aur dil ko chu lainay wali hai. Is ki har satar say Ahl-e-bait say aap ki muhabta chalak rahi hai Allah aap ki taufeeqat mein izaafa karay. Anis Hasan Sahab Assalam alaikum aap ke har lafz ek nawaazish hai mere liye....duaaoN aur nazm ki s...

bohat Aziz behan Nigaah ji salaam-e-khuloos aap ki yeh nigaarish peRh ker nehaal ho gaee. es qder Haseen aur Haqeeqi terjumaani ki hai keh I salute you!!!! merHabaa!!!! aik aik shaer peRh ker dil sae aik aah nikal gaee. aik teRap aik izreraab aik be-basee ka aHsaas huaa. ap nae Maskhallah bohat ach...

pichlay saal ye nazm ek forum per paish ki thi....jooN ki tooN haazir hai! Aadaab arz hai, tamaam Ahl-e-Bazm ki khidmat main! baroz das(10) muharram TV per ek mushaaira karbala ki yaad main nashr kiya gaya tha ...jis main ek shaair nay nehr-e-feraat say mukhaatib ho kar kaha tha .."aay nehr-e-...

Tahira Masood Sahiba aap ki is nazm ko paRh kar dil aap ki soch ki gehraai ka qaail ho gaya....... bohut dil pazeer nazm likhi hai aap nay .... is ka ajr tou aap ko milay ga hi ....saath hi her wo nazar jo is nazm ko jazb kartay huay Ishq-e-Imam maiN labraiz hui hogi......us say girnay waalay har qa...

Tahira Masood Sahiba aap ki is nazm ko paRh kar dil aap ki soch ki gehraai ka qaail ho gaya....... bohut dil pazeer nazm likhi hai aap nay .... is ka ajr tou aap ko milay ga hi ....saath hi her wo nazar jo is nazm ko jazb kartay huay Ishq-e-Imam maiN labraiz hui hogi......us say girnay waalay har qa...

jin ke sadqe meN he sairaab KHuda ki maKHlooq un ke KHaime lab e darya se haTata he yazeed kis qadr sach hai.... kese bad baKht-o-roo siyaah hongay jinhoN nay aal-e-Rasool s.a.w ke saath darindoN jesa sulook kiya..... riwaayat maiN hai ke yazidi lashkar ke kuch loag kehtay thay....jaldi Hussain ko q...