salaam Kausar saaHiba, aapko is maHfil meN maiN Khush_aamded kahtaa huuN. aapkii Ghazal paRhi aur paRh kar bahot achchhaa lagaa. aapkii Gahzal ke mazaameen aur Khayaal achchhe haiN magar mujhe lagta hai aapko abhii thoRii mashq kii aur zaroorat hai aur insha Allah jald hii aapkii lagan aur fahm ...

zindagi too rukh-e-zeibaa hai liyey aayi magar ab na hai dil pe teray husna ke jaadoo kaa asar teree aankhaun ke yeh rangeen-o-haseen afsaanay ab na is dil mein talaatum koi laa sakte hein husn-e-aalam ke taranaun se saje lab terey dhardkanaun mein na koi raag jaga sakte hein teray chehray pe yeh ...