Apni aik ghazal aap sub ahbaab ki khidmat mein paish kar raha houn parh kar apni aa'ra say zaroor nawaziyay ga. YEHI AHWAAL RAKHNAY HAIN ISI HAALAT MEIN REHNA HAI YEH HUM NAY TAY KIYA HAI AB YOUNHI WEHSHAT MEIN REHNA HAI KOYEE MAUSAM KOYEE RUT HO TUMHARAY QURB KI HUM KO KABHI KHAWAHISH MEIN REHNA H...

Apni aik ghazal aap sub ahbaab ki khidmat mein paish kar raha houn parh kar apni aa'ra say zaroor nawaziyay ga. YEHI AHWAAL RAKHNAY HAIN ISI HAALAT MEIN REHNA HAI YEH HUM NAY TAY KIYA HAI AB YOUNHI WEHSHAT MEIN REHNA HAI KOYEE MAUSAM KOYEE RUT HO TUMHARAY QURB KI HUM KO KABHI KHAWAHISH MEIN REHNA H...

MuHtarami Anis Hasan Saahib Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Saare ashAar meiN mazmoon aafreeni hei aur majmooAi taur per paRhne waalaoN ke liye aek paigham bhii hei. Khaksaar kii daad aur mubarakbaad haazir hei. Aapka Mukhlis, Nazir. Mohtaram Nazir saheb, Aap ki purkhuloos da...

Apni aik ghazal aap sub ahbaab ki khidmat mein paish kar raha houn parh kar apni aa'ra say zaroor nawaziyay ga. YEHI AHWAAL RAKHNAY HAIN ISI HAALAT MEIN REHNA HAI YEH HUM NAY TAY KIYA HAI AB YOUNHI WEHSHAT MEIN REHNA HAI KOYEE MAUSAM KOYEE RUT HO TUMHARAY QURB KI HUM KO KABHI KHAWAHISH MEIN REHNA HA...

doostoo joo sabad adm sahib nay bataya hay mayray forum chooRnay ka sabad woo nahi tha. aik nazm kay sath janay ka irada multavi kar kay hazir hoon rizwan Mohtaram Dawood" sahib aap ki nazm buhat pasand aayee. Aap nay buhat khubusurti say apnay khayalat ko nazm kiya hai. Saath hi aap ko apnay ...

Mohtarm Abdullah Nazir Sahab: Tasleemat T,AAmil.e irshad meN ek ghazal ke kuch she'r irsal kar raha hooN. Ummid hai hausa afzaii farmayenge. Apka Mukhlis, Jawaid Badauni Muscat Oman idhar kyaa nigaah-e-muHabbat nah hougi Idhar kya nagaah-e Mohabbat nah hogi Mire lub pe phir bhi shikayat nah hogi Na...

Mohtarma Nigah diyay gayay misray par buhat achi tarhee ghazal likhi hai aap nay saada aur dilkash bharpoor daad qabool kijiyay.

najma wrote:
AZIZ SATHIYO!

EK GHAZAL K SAATH BAZM MEIN HAAZIR HOON

ARZ KIYA HAY

Buhat achi aur khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay Mohtarma "Najma" bharpoor daad qabool kijiyay.

DAALA HAI TASHNAGI NAY YEH KAISAY AZAAB MEIN DARYA TALASH KARTAY HAIN HUM HAR SARAB MEIN AB DAIKHNA HAI HOTI HAI KAB MEHR'BAN WOH AANKH REHNA HAI AUR KITNAY DINON TAK ITAAB MEIN DARTAY HAIN NEEND AAYAY TU KHO JAYAY NA KAHEEN PAAYA HAI JIS KO JAAGTI AANKHON KAY KHAWAB MEIN YEH ISHQ KI HAI AAG JALA D...

Mohtarma "Shumaila" aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayee. Buhat hi saada aur dilkash andaz-e-bayan hai saray hi ashaar buhat umdah hain magar mujhay zaati taur par shair no.4 & 5 ziyada pasand aayay.

Mohtarma "Nigaah",
Aap ki yeh nazm buhat pur asar aur dil ko chu lainay wali hai. Is ki har satar say Ahl-e-bait say aap ki muhabta chalak rahi hai Allah aap ki taufeeqat mein izaafa karay.

Buhat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay Mohtarma"NAHEED" nisai ehsaas ki bharpoor akkasi karti hui. Buhat daad qabool kijiyay.

DAALA HAI TASHNAGI NAY YEH KAISAY AZAAB MEIN DARYA TALASH KARTAY HAIN HUM HAR SARAB MEIN --Wahhhhhhhh behad umda MATLA!!! :shock: YEH ISHQ KI HAI AAG JALA DAY GI JISM-O-JAAN "DIL KIS SHUMAR MEIN HAI JIGAR KIS HISAAB MEIN --giraah bhi khoob hai! LOGON KAY DIL KA HAAL KHULAY KIS TARAH YAHAN CHEH...

MuHtarami ANIS HASAN Saahib Aapki TaraHi ghazal baasirah navaaz houi aur bahut pasand aayi. 1) DAALA HAI TASHNAGI NAY YEH KAISAY AZAAB MEIN DARYA TALASH KARTAY HAIN HUM HAR SARAB MEIN 1) MaTlA bahut achcha hei. 2) AB DAIKHNA HAI HOTI HAI KAB MEHR'BAN WOH AANKH REHNA HAI AUR KITNAY DINON TAK ATAAB M...

najma wrote:bohat khoob anis hasan sahiob
3rd sher to bohat hii pasand aya.
khoobsoorat kalam par daad hazir hay
:)

Buhat Shukriya Mohtarma "Najma" Sahiba.