najma wrote:bohat khoob anis hasan sahiob
3rd sher to bohat hii pasand aya.
khoobsoorat kalam par daad hazir hay
:)

Buhat Shukriya Mohtarma "Najma" Sahiba.

Diyay gayay misra-e-tarah par main nay bhi apni si koshish ki hai jo haazir hai. Apni qeemti aara zaroor dijiyay ga. DAALA HAI TASHNAGI NAY YEH KAISAY AZAAB MEIN DARYA TALASH KARTAY HAIN HUM HAR SARAB MEIN AB DAIKHNA HAI HOTI HAI KAB MEHR'BAN WOH AANKH REHNA HAI AUR KITNAY DINON TAK ITAAB MEIN DARTA...

Jawaid bhai aap ki is ghazal ki taareef pehlay bhi kar chuka houn aik baar phir buhat si daad hazir hai.

Buhat achi ghazal likhi hai aap nay "Fatimah" saadgi aur khubsurti ka acha namoona daad qabool kijiyay.

Mohtarma "Najma" saahiba buhat khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay buhat ssari daad qabool kijiyay. Saaray hi ashaar pasand aayay laikin pehla shair apni khas kaifiat ki wajah say dil ko chy gaya.

Adaab Anis hasan sahab...sab se pehle to KHUSHAAMADEED is mehfil mein..pehli dafaa aap ka koi kalaam paRh rahi hoon aur saaf zaahir hota hai ke aap kaafi pukhtaa likhaari hain...aap ka kalaam bahut pasand aaya..quoted ash'aar bahut achche lage..daad haazir hai..aate rahiyega ...aur bhi apne kalaam ...

naheedv wrote:
janaab Anis saahab,

aap ki ghazal paRh kar dil khush huvaa.
buhat pukhta kalaam hai mashaa'Allah aap kaa aur iss mehfil mein aik achaa izaafah bhee.
meree taraf se daad qubool kijiye.

shukriya
Naheed

Mohtarma "Naheed" saahiba aap ki daad par behud mamnoon houn.

MuHtaram Anis Hasan Saahib Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :) Aap ne apni hii is meHfil meiN tashreef laakar hameN behad mamnoon farmaayaa hei aur saath hii saath aik bahut dhii ikash se hamaaraa dil bhii jeet liyaa hei. Aapki ghazal ke saare ashAar bahut hii khoobsoorat mazaameen ke saath baasirah navaaz h...

najma wrote:


janab anis hasan sahib
aapki ghazal biohat hi pasand aaee,so bohat hii daad bhi hazir hay.acha kalam parh k tabi,at khush ho jatii hay.
:)

Mohtarma "Najma" sahiba ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka behud shukriya.

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