Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei
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by Handsome » Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:34 pm
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by Ibn-e-siddique » Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:49 pm
Handsome saHib
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee
bahot khoob
Amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
Anmol
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by Anmol » Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:30 am
Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
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by Shummu » Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:22 am
wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..
Shumaila
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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by Handsome » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
Ibn-e-siddique wrote: Handsome saHib
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee
bahot khoob
Amjad
wasalam
pasand kernay ka shukerya
khush rahain
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by Handsome » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
Anmol wrote: Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
Bohat shukerya
Khush rahin
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by Handsome » Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:00 am
sara_j wrote: bohat khoob handsome...aap bhi shayri ka shaukh rakhte hain.........
lekin jis mauzzu per likhe hain acha laga.
isi tarah likhte rahiye.
sara
hmm lagta hay app meri nazam ka merkazi khial samagh gai hay
pasand kernay ka shukerya
Khush rahain
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Handsome
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by Handsome » Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:01 am
Shummu wrote: wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..
Shumaila
hmmm ary may bohat bada shair ho Galib kay bad mera hi to number at ahy
Pasand kernay ka shykerya
Khush rahin
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