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Handsome saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee

bahot khoob

Amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
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wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..

Shumaila

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to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Handsome saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee

bahot khoob

Amjad
wasalam

pasand kernay ka shukerya

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Anmol wrote:Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
Bohat shukerya

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sara_j wrote:bohat khoob handsome...aap bhi shayri ka shaukh rakhte hain.........
lekin jis mauzzu per likhe hain acha laga.

isi tarah likhte rahiye.

sara

hmm lagta hay app meri nazam ka merkazi khial samagh gai hay

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Shummu wrote:wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..

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hmmm ary may bohat bada shair ho Galib kay bad mera hi to number at ahy :twisted:


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