Harf e tay se ashaar

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taRapte haiN, na rote haiN, na ham faryaad karte haiN
sanam kii yaad meN har_dam Khudaa ko yaad karte haiN


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teraa, meraa jhagRaa kia, jab ik aaNgan kii miTTii hai
apne badan ko dekh le chhuu kar, mere badan kii miTTii hai


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teraa, meraa jhagRaa kia, jab ik aaNgan kii miTTii hai
apne badan ko dekh le chhuu kar, mere badan kii miTTii hai


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teraa, meraa jhagRaa kia, jab ik aaNgan kii miTTii hai
apne badan ko dekh le chhuu kar, mere badan kii miTTii hai


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taiy hoNgay kis-tarah yeh maraaHil, kahaa na jaaey
is teergii meiN kyaa hay muqaabil, kahaa na jaaey
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Mohatrama Najma ji is sher ki ibtida tay se nahi toye se ho rahi hai.
sauti aitebaar se to theek hai, magar jab ham har harf ke ashaar juda juda jama kar rahe hoN to mere khyal se isay toye ke ashaar mai rakha jaana chahiye.

taiy hoNgay kis-tarah yeh maraaHil, kahaa na jaaey
is teergii meiN kyaa hay muqaabil, kahaa na jaaey

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thii aabloN ko bohat zidd, keh phooT phooT paReiN
bas ek kaaNTaa chubhoya gayaa naheeN ham se
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tishnagii, tishnagii, aray taubah
qatre qatre ko ham taraste haiN
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talkhii-e-dar hi muqaddar thii
jam-e-ishrat hameN ataa na hua
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tamannay-e-viSaal-e-yaar ne wo gham diye mujhko

mii dunyaa micaal-e-sulf-e-barham houti jaati hei.



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Post by najma »

tuu badaltaa hay to be-shaakhtah merii aaNkheN
apne haathoN ki lakeeroN se ulajh jaatii haiN
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tamanna meri jaz o dil ban gaii hai
na aaney ke qabil na jaaney ke qabil
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teri mehfil bhi gayi chahnay waley bhi gaye
shab ki aahieN bhi gayieN subah kay naalay bhi gaye
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Post by shahnaz zafar »

tujh main jo kho gayaa to huwaa apnaa saamnaa!
ab sochtaa hoon, Khud se main chup kar kahaan rahoon?
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tere qariib rahuuN, yaa k duur jaauuN maiN
hai dil kaa ek hii 'aalam, tujhii ko chaahuuN maiN


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