Urdustan per pesh ki houi TaraHi Ghazal: Abdullah Nazir.
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Urdustan per pesh ki houi TaraHi Ghazal: Abdullah Nazir.
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Arbaab-e-MeHfil aur aHbaab-e-sukhan,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, :rose
Maah-e-April ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karne ki saAadat HaaSil karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke baAZ ashAar pasand aayenge. Aapki giraaNqadr aaraa kaa intizaar rahegaa.
GHAZAL roman meiN:
dil ne kyaa kyaa nah uRaaye tiri ulfat ke maze
gaahe furqat ke maze aur gahe vaSlat ke maze
ik taSannuA sahi andaaz-e-taghaaful teraa
"dekh tuu kaise chkhaataa hooN muHabbat ke maze"
un se pooche koii ikhlaaS o tavakkul kyaa hei
jin ko aate heiN gadaayi meiN ibaadat ke maze
maiN jhukaaletaa hooN sar Arz-e-tamanna karke
wo sitam karte heiN le le ke muravvat ke maze
Darrahe heiN ke nah houjaaye zabaaN be-qaaboo
Chakh liye ham ne ravaadaariy-e-ghurbat ke maze
Shoukhiy-e-Husn peh houtaa hei taAjjub mujh ko
Tum keh lete ho mire Aalam-e-Hairat ke maze
Yaad aate heiN tou houjaati heiN aankheN purnam
Haaye wo apne laRakpan ki sharaarat ke maze
Chaahtaa hooN maiN tujhe dushman-e-jaaN kehkar bhii
Dil-lagi meiN hi tou houte heiN shikaayat ke maze
Kuch tou hou zaad-e-safar jaada-e-uqbaa ke liye
Zindagi bhar jo uRaate rahe daulat ke maze
Dekhte kyaa hou mire chaak girebaaN ki Taraf
Koocha-e-yaar meiN houte heiN qiyaamat ke maze
Kaun hei dehr meiN :Nazir: saa shanaasaa teraa
Kaun letaa hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat ke maze
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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aadaab.
waah! eik nihayat khoobsoorat takhleeq par meri jaanib se dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaaiye. har shayr miyaari aur pur asar hai. jo asha'ar mujhe khaas taur par achhe lage unheN darj kar raha huN:
dil ne kyaa kyaa nah uRaaye tiri ulfat ke maze
gaahe furqat ke maze aur gahe vaSlat ke maze
ik taSannuA sahi andaaz-e-taghaaful teraa
"dekh tuu kaise chkhaataa hooN muHabbat ke maze"
un se pooche koii ikhlaaS o tavakkul kyaa hei
jin ko aate heiN gadaayi meiN ibaadat ke maze
maiN jhukaaletaa hooN sar Arz-e-tamanna karke
wo sitam karte heiN le le ke muravvat ke maze
Darrahe heiN ke nah houjaaye zabaaN be-qaaboo
Chakh liye ham ne ravaadaariy-e-ghurbat ke maze
Kuch tou hou zaad-e-safar jaada-e-uqbaa ke liye
Zindagi bhar jo uRaate rahe daulat ke maze
Dekhte kyaa hou mire chaak girebaaN ki Taraf
Koocha-e-yaar meiN houte heiN qiyaamat ke maze
Kaun hei dehr meiN :Nazir: saa shanaasaa teraa
Kaun letaa hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat ke maze
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aadaab.
waah! eik nihayat khoobsoorat takhleeq par meri jaanib se dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaaiye. har shayr miyaari aur pur asar hai. jo asha'ar mujhe khaas taur par achhe lage unheN darj kar raha huN:
dil ne kyaa kyaa nah uRaaye tiri ulfat ke maze
gaahe furqat ke maze aur gahe vaSlat ke maze
ik taSannuA sahi andaaz-e-taghaaful teraa
"dekh tuu kaise chkhaataa hooN muHabbat ke maze"
un se pooche koii ikhlaaS o tavakkul kyaa hei
jin ko aate heiN gadaayi meiN ibaadat ke maze
maiN jhukaaletaa hooN sar Arz-e-tamanna karke
wo sitam karte heiN le le ke muravvat ke maze
Darrahe heiN ke nah houjaaye zabaaN be-qaaboo
Chakh liye ham ne ravaadaariy-e-ghurbat ke maze
Kuch tou hou zaad-e-safar jaada-e-uqbaa ke liye
Zindagi bhar jo uRaate rahe daulat ke maze
Dekhte kyaa hou mire chaak girebaaN ki Taraf
Koocha-e-yaar meiN houte heiN qiyaamat ke maze
Kaun hei dehr meiN :Nazir: saa shanaasaa teraa
Kaun letaa hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat ke maze
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rau meiN hai raksh-e-umr kahaN dekhiye thhame
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
nay haath baag par hai na paa hai rikaab meiN--Ghalib
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Bahut bahut shukriyah
MuHtaramah
Saara SaaHibah,
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PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne us per apne giraaNqadr TabSire se navaazaa. Is HauSlah afzaayi per maiN aapka beHad shukrguzaar hooN aur ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhi yooN hi apni qeemati aaraas se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA deti rahengi.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Re: Urdustan per pesh ki houi TaraHi Ghazal: Abdullah Nazir.
MoHteram mukarram Nazir SahebWEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Arbaab-e-MeHfil aur aHbaab-e-sukhan,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, :rose
Maah-e-April ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karne ki saAadat HaaSil karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke baAZ ashAar pasand aayenge. Aapki giraaNqadr aaraa kaa intizaar rahegaa.
GHAZAL roman meiN:
dil ne kyaa kyaa nah uRaaye tiri ulfat ke maze
gaahe furqat ke maze aur gahe vaSlat ke maze
ik taSannuA sahi andaaz-e-taghaaful teraa
"dekh tuu kaise chkhaataa hooN muHabbat ke maze"
un se pooche koii ikhlaaS o tavakkul kyaa hei
jin ko aate heiN gadaayi meiN ibaadat ke maze
maiN jhukaaletaa hooN sar Arz-e-tamanna karke
wo sitam karte heiN le le ke muravvat ke maze
Darrahe heiN ke nah houjaaye zabaaN be-qaaboo
Chakh liye ham ne ravaadaariy-e-ghurbat ke maze
Shoukhiy-e-Husn peh houtaa hei taAjjub mujh ko
Tum keh lete ho mire Aalam-e-Hairat ke maze
Yaad aate heiN tou houjaati heiN aankheN purnam
Haaye wo apne laRakpan ki sharaarat ke maze
Chaahtaa hooN maiN tujhe dushman-e-jaaN kehkar bhii
Dil-lagi meiN hi tou houte heiN shikaayat ke maze
Kuch tou hou zaad-e-safar jaada-e-uqbaa ke liye
Zindagi bhar jo uRaate rahe daulat ke maze
Dekhte kyaa hou mire chaak girebaaN ki Taraf
Koocha-e-yaar meiN houte heiN qiyaamat ke maze
Kaun hei dehr meiN :Nazir: saa shanaasaa teraa
Kaun letaa hei tiri chashm-e-inaayat ke maze
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
Tasleemaat
aik nehaayat murassah ghazal inaayat fermaane per dilee shuekriyah qabuul fermaaeiN
hameN bohat kuch seekhne ko mil jaata hai es teraH
Jazakomullah
khush rehiye
wassalam
live and let live
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Bahut bahut shukriyah
MuHtaramah
Tahira Masood SaaHibah,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Javaab dene meiN takheer ke liye maAziratkhwaah hooN.
Apni ghazal ki pazeeraayi ke liye aapkaa beHad shukrguzaar hooN aur ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhi isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaati rahengi taakeh khaaksaar ki mashq-e-sukhan jaari reh sake.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir,