"basaa dena chaahiye"tarhi ghazal peshe khidmat ha

[haamidbaaqri]

salaamun alaikum
dosto

aik aur adna kaavish peshe khidmat hai

umeed hai pasand farmaaye.nge

arz kiya hai....


khulde baree.n ki raah dikhaa dena chaahiye
islam ka payaam sunaa dena chaahiye

jistar'ha hai khuda ki munazzam yeh kaayenaat
ustar'ha ka samaaj banaa dena chaahiye

insaan jee sakay jahaa.n amno sukoon se
dunyaa mei.n aise shahr basaa dena chaahiye

zulmo sitam ghareeb pe jo karte hai.n ameer
un bhediyo.n ka khoon bahaa dena chaahiye

jinke nifaaq se hai pareshaa.n mu^aashera
aise munaafiqo.n ko mitaa dena chaahiye

haamid woh sang dil hai.n jo yeh baat kehte hai.n
"shaakho.n se panchiyo.n ko udaa dena chaahiye"

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah

[tahira Masood]

waaaaaaah subHaan Allah bohat hi a'alaa aur munfarid

jazaakomullaho AHsanil Jazaa

[haamidbaaqri]

waaaaaaah subHaan Allah bohat hi a'alaa aur munfarid

jazaakomullaho AHsanil Jazaa

mohtaramah tahira masood saahebah
salaamun alaikum

aapki purkhuloos daad aur duao.n keliye hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen.

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aap ne apne makhSooS andaaz meiN bahut achchi ghazal kahi hei jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

khulde baree.n ki raah dikhaa dena chaahiye
islam ka payaam sunaa dena chaahiye

achcha maTlaA hei. waah waah.

jistar'ha hai khuda ki munazzam yeh kaayenaat
ustar'ha ka samaaj banaa dena chaahiye

achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.

insaan jee sakay jahaa.n amno sukoon se
aise shahar jahaa.n mei.n basaa dena chaahiye

Doosre meiSreA meiN "shehr" ko aap ne "shehar" kahaa hei jiski vajh se miSraA be-BeHr hougayaa hei. Isko yooN kiyaa jaasaktaa hei:
dunyaa meiN aise shehr basaadenaa chaahiye
Mafhoom ke liHaaz se achchaa sheAr hei, waah waah.

zulmo sitam ghareeb pe jo karte hai.n ameer
un bhediyo.n ka khoon bahaa dena chaahiye

Bahut ziyaadah jazbaati sheAr hougayaa hei.

jinke nifaaq se hai pareshaa.n mu^aashera
aise munaafiqo.n ko mitaa dena chaahiye

Theek sheAr achchaa hei. Bahut khoob.

haamid woh sang dil hai.n jo yeh baat kehte hai.n
"shaakho.n se panchiyo.n ko udaa dena chaahiye"

Achcha maqTaA hei. Bahut khoob.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

[haamidbaaqri]

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aap ne apne makhSooS andaaz meiN bahut achchi ghazal kahi hei jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

khulde baree.n ki raah dikhaa dena chaahiye
islam ka payaam sunaa dena chaahiye

achcha maTlaA hei. waah waah.

jistar'ha hai khuda ki munazzam yeh kaayenaat
ustar'ha ka samaaj banaa dena chaahiye

achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.

insaan jee sakay jahaa.n amno sukoon se
aise shahar jahaa.n mei.n basaa dena chaahiye

Doosre meiSreA meiN "shehr" ko aap ne "shehar" kahaa hei jiski vajh se miSraA be-BeHr hougayaa hei. Isko yooN kiyaa jaasaktaa hei:
dunyaa meiN aise shehr basaadenaa chaahiye
Mafhoom ke liHaaz se achchaa sheAr hei, waah waah.

zulmo sitam ghareeb pe jo karte hai.n ameer
un bhediyo.n ka khoon bahaa dena chaahiye

Bahut ziyaadah jazbaati sheAr hougayaa hei.

jinke nifaaq se hai pareshaa.n mu^aashera
aise munaafiqo.n ko mitaa dena chaahiye

Theek sheAr achchaa hei. Bahut khoob.

haamid woh sang dil hai.n jo yeh baat kehte hai.n
"shaakho.n se panchiyo.n ko udaa dena chaahiye"

Achcha maqTaA hei. Bahut khoob.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

mohtaram abdullah nazir saaib
salaamun alaikum

aapki hauslah afzaayee aur muklisaanah daad ke behad shukrguzaar hai.n.

us misre ko humne edit kardiya hai.hum samajh nahi.n paarahe hai.n keh yeh ghalati humse kaise hogayee.ghalati ki nishaandahi keliye hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.ab woh sher waaqayee khoobsoorat hogaya hai.jazakallah

umeed hai aayindah bhi aap hamaari rehnumaayee farmaate rahe.nge

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri