Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

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yaqeen karne ko karloon maiN unki batoN par
magar wo roz naee baat suna detay haiN
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magar/ haiN
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mere dil ki dhaRkanoN se tira Gham hay aashkaaraa
keh yehii Gham-e-mohabbat mire dil ka hay sahaaraa
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keh/sahaaraa
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sara_j wrote:kaha betaab hoker meri rooh-e-jawaidaani se

keh haasil roshni ker is fazaaye aasmaani se

hmmmmmmmm :P

aap ne sher ko ------- :wink: :grin:

ab bataiyye ham =say=se she,r kahaan se laeiN? :roll:
Daal diyana uljhan meiN-------------- :evil:

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acha sochen gay
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sara_j wrote:najjo ji aapke liye aek shair bilkul taza ustadji ke qalam se :grin:

keh bhool jaaouN na maiN apni baat us ne kahaa
khayaal rakhyiye ke milnaa zaroor hei kal bhii



khayaal / bhii
hmmmm
ye huee na baaaaat ustadanah
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khayal-e-yaar ne choRaa na saath jeetay-jee
gayaa, to saath mirii ruuh ka dhuwaaN lekar
nafis ahmad siddiqui

gaya/le-kar
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gayaa hou jaise koii mere dil ko chootaa houaa

maiN rourahaa hooN akele meiN siskiyaaN lekar.


maiN / lekar


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maiN kis se apni tabaahii ki daastaan kahooN
mujhe halaak kiya hay mire maseehaa nay
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miree zindagii bhi yaro! kya ajeeb zindagi hay
na qafas hi raas aaya, na chaman ka aab-o-danah
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hamare shehr ki rasmeN, ajeeb rasmeN haiN
keh rah-zanoN ka yahaN koee eh,tisaab naheeN
bakhsh

keh/naheeN
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haiN log wohii jahaaN meiN achay

aatay haiN jo kam doosroN ke

aatay/kay
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hay eh,timaam-e-giryah-o-maatam chaman chaman
rakhay haiN maqtaloN meiN janazay sajay huey
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rakhay/huey
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tuu abhii rah_guzar meN hai, qaid-e-maqaam se guzar
Misr_o_Hijaaz se guzar, Paaras_o_Shaam se guzar


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nafrat se pesh aa ke muHabbat se pesh aa

jaanaa nahiN hei mujhko tiri rehguzar se door.


( jaanaa / door )


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Bas zaraa choone nahiN paaye thay paimaane ko ham

dekhte hii reh gaye veeran maikhaane ko ham.


dekhte / ham


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loag kyaa kehte heiN yeh fikr nahiN hei mujhko

yooN nah chup chup ke karo khooN mire armaanaoN kaa.


"alif"


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yuN sajaa chaand k jhalkaa tire andaaz kaa rang
yuN fazaa mahkii k badlaa mire ham_raaz kaa rang



Faiz AHmad Faiz
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