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"oos zulf ke barham houte hee Allah re shaane kee kaavish

ik raat idhar houjaati hei, ik raat udhar houjaati hei".


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soyenge terii aankh ki Khalwat meiN kisi raat
saaye meiN tiri zulf ke jaagenge kisi din--Amjad Islaam Amjad
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maot kee neend chaee jatee hai
keh chuka hooN fasanah-e-Gham kiya?

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khud-shinaasi meiN din kaTaa saaraa

aankh lagte hee tum nazar aaye.


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WEBMASTER wrote:


"oos zulf ke barham houte hee Allah re shaane kee kaavish

ik raat idhar houjaati hei, ik raat udhar houjaati hei".


Shaayer: Behzad Lucknawi


Nazir.

Nazir saheb
aadaab.

aap ne bohat achhaa sher share kiyaa hai. shukriyaa.


iss sher ne kaafee puranaa sher yaad dilayaa hai. pesh hai:


bharpoor zawanee meiN jis dam, tayyaar nazar ho jatee hai
phir shiekh.o.biraHman koi ho, har aik ke sar ho jatee hai

cheHre se haTaa kar zulfoN ko, jab vo ek jhaTkaa dete haiN
din miree taraf ho jataa hai, aur raat udhar ho jatee hai !


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mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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cheHre se haTaa kar zulfoN ko, jab vo ek jhaTkaa dete haiN
din miree taraf ho jataa hai, aur raat udhar ho jatee hai !



muskuraate hu'e chehre se jhhaTakdo zulfeiN
rang-o-anwaar ki barsaat ho veeraane meiN
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"oos zulf peh phabti shab-e-daijoor kee soojhi

andhe ko andhere meiN baRi door kee soojhi".





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zulmat_kade meiN mere shab-e-Gham ka josh hai
ik shama hai daleel-e-seHer so Khumosh hai
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teri trikiyan hain paishkhima khushnasibi ka
sitarey kerty hain paishengoi aasmanoun main
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hameeN khabar hai keh ham haiN charaaGh-e-aakhree shab
hamare ba'd andhera naheeN ujala hai.

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"raat ke guzarne per aek aur raat aayi

ham tou yeh samajhe thay din nikalne waalaa heii".


Shaayer: Shaahid Siddiqui (Hyd.Deccan)


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[align=center]nah shab ko chaand hee achch~a nah din ko meher achch~a

yeh ham pej beet raheeN haiN qiYamateeN kesee?

(U'baed Ullah A'leem)
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[align=center]ham intezar kareeN ge tira qiyamat tak
khuda kare keh qiyamat ho aor tu aaYe!
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"hazarouN khwaahisheN aisi ke her khwaahis peh dam ninkle

bahut nikle mire armaan lekin phir bhee kam nikle".


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insaaN kee KhvaahishoN kee koee intehaa naheeN
do Ghaz zameeN bhii chaahiye do Ghaz qafan ke baad
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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