:: baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN ::

[Star Mind]

Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!

shukriya

:: Urdu Version ::



:: Roman Version ::

1.

zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !

2.

i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !

3.

dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !

4.

aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !

5.

josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !

6.

kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !

7.

kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !

8.

lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !

...........................................................

Zia Baloch

[m.naeem.sameer]

Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!

shukriya

:: Urdu Version ::



:: Roman Version ::

1.

zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !

2.

i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !

3.

dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !

4.

aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !

5.

josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !

6.

kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !

7.

kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !

8.

lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !

...........................................................

Zia Baloch

aadaab Zia bhaii



bohat khoob Zia SaaHib bohat khoob. Khaaksaar ki jaanib se daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.




Sameer

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

moHtaram Biradaram Z^iya balaoch SaaHib ! :rose

Aap kee tazah Ghazal dekhee jo keh aap ke makhSooS andaaz aor jawaaN fikr sooch kee aae'inah daar hai. mujh~e akcar ta'ajub hotaa hai keh aap kee maadaree zabaan z^aahir hai keh :Balaochee: hee ho gee. aor ghar kaa maHool qabeelah ke rasm-o-riwaaj a'adaat-o-at^waar bhee yaqeena" apne khit^t^e ya'nee Balochistaan se muta'aliqah hee hooN gee. lekin is sab batooN ke bawajood urdu se raGhbat aor khuSuSa" urdu shae'eree se walehanah muhabbat aor a'qeedat kaa honaa bazaat-e-khud aek mu'jizah hai.

kalam khubSurat aor dilkash hai. meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.


Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar

[Star Mind]

Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !

aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!

shukriya

:: Urdu Version ::



:: Roman Version ::

1.

zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !

2.

i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !

3.

dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !

4.

aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !

5.

josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !

6.

kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !

7.

kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !

8.

lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !

...........................................................

Zia Baloch

aadaab Zia bhaii



bohat khoob Zia SaaHib bohat khoob. Khaaksaar ki jaanib se daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.




Sameer

Sameer bhaa'ii, w/salaam :)

yeh aap ki maHabbat aur aap kaa Husn-e-nazar hai ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! shukriya

Zia Baloch