Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei
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najma
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by najma » Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:22 am
sara_j wrote: Najma ji,
aap bohat khoobsurat ghazal ke saath aayein, sab hi ashaar ache hain # 1, 2, 3, 4 aur 8 bohat pasand aaye. humein bohat khushi hui.
ainda bhi aapke kalaam ka intezar rahega.
sara
arrrrayyyyyyyyyyyyyyysara jee
sorry
na jane kese miss hogaee apki post
bohat bohat aur bohat hi shukriya iss hausla afzaaee aur pazeeraee ka.
khush rahiyey
najma
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by najma » Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:24 am
sara_j wrote: sara_j wrote: Najma ji,
aap bohat khoobsurat ghazal ke saath aayein, sab hi ashaar ache hain # 1, 2, 3, 4 aur 8 bohat pasand aaye. humein bohat khushi hui.
ainda bhi aapke kalaam ka intezar rahega.
sara
koi jawab nahi mila
dekhiyey sara jee!
ab ham ne jawab dediya hay aur raseed hazir hay
oopar dekhiyey zara
ab khushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh?
Anjum
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by Anjum » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:25 pm
[quote="najma"]ek ghazal
hawaaon say gilah karnay lagii hoo
chalay aaein! k ab bujhnay lagii hoon
ab-itnii barh gaee hay gham ki qeemat
rulanay per na main ronay lagii hoon
buhat piyara ,dil ko chou lainay wala andaaz hay aap ka najma jee.keep it up.
najma
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Posts: 1213 Joined: Fri Feb 04, 2005 10:37 pm
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by najma » Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:51 pm
Anjum wrote: najma wrote: ek ghazal
hawaaon say gilah karnay lagii hoo
chalay aaein! k ab bujhnay lagii hoon
ab-itnii barh gaee hay gham ki qeemat
rulanay per na main ronay lagii hoon
buhat piyara ,dil ko chou lainay wala andaaz hay aap ka najma jee.keep it up.
bohat inayat hay aapkii anjum jee!
aur sirf itna hii naheeN, ye aapka husn-e-nazar bhi hay.
khush rahiyey