sara_j wrote:Sohail sahib,

bohat khoob!

shair # 1. 3. 4. 6. aur girah aapne bohat achi lagayi hai.

ye sab hi ashaar bohat pasand aaye.

daad qubool keejiye.

sara

Sara saaheba pasandeedgi ka bohat shukria

jawab maiN takheer ki mazeret

wassalam

Sohail Malik

Mohterem jawaid badauni Saaheb

aadab!

aap ki janib say hosla afzai per mamnoon huN

jawab maiN takheer ki mazeret

wassalam

Sohail Malik

bard wrote:Aadab Sohail Sahib,
Mujhay ap ke Ghazal mein colloquial(aam bol chal)Urdu ka istemal buhut passand aya.Ye lafz ab bolay nahi jatay par Urdu ka hissa aur husn hain. `kahay`ya`ap mein`ya `mitte ka madho`buhut bhalay lagay.
Eik umda Ghazal likhnay par is nacheez ke bhe dad qubool kejeyay

bard saaheb

ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohat shukria

meri koshish hoti hay keh masnui pen say hatel imkaan bacha jaey

mozuaat bhi haqeeqi duniya kay hoN aur alfaz bhi


jawab maiN takheer ki mazeret

wassalam

Sohail Malik