Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:51 pm

Merii her baat ko baataoN meiN uRaadete hou

kin gunaahaoN kii khudaa jaane sazaa dete hou.

(kin /hou)

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 4:01 pm

bohat khoob

hoga dil se bhi ziyadah yahaaN naadaaN koee

DhoonD ne nikla, ilaaj-e-Gham-e-dauraaN koee :?
najma
DhoonDne/koee

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:13 pm

DhoonDne jaayeN kahaaN tujhko bayaabaanaoN meiN

ham heiN pahle hii se shaamil tire deewaanaoN meiN

( ham / meiN }

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 7:27 pm

ham ne to chaahaatha, un se mud,da,aa kardeN bayaaN
lafz kuch aaey zabaaN par, aur aa kar reh gaey
najma

lafz/gaey

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 8:53 pm

lafz aajiz agaaye, kaise bayaaN hou Haal-e-dil

shaam-e-hijraaN teraa aanaa ghair mumkin hougayaa.

(shaam / hougayaa)

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:03 pm

shaam-e-zindzgii
maatamii libaas
doobne lagii
zindagii ki aas

najma

zindagii/aas

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:20 pm

Zindagi tere liye sahte rahe dard o alm

Aur jab maut aagaii her kaam aasaaN hougayaa.

(aur / hougayaa)

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:22 pm

aur ban jaaooNgaa saaqii ko dikhaane ke liye
hosh aayaa bhi to keh-doongaa, mujhe hosh naheeN
hosh/naheeN

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:33 pm

housh kis ko thaa bhalaa housh tou ab aayaa hei

jabkeh daaman hei salaamat nah girebaaN saahib.

(jab / saahib)

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:39 pm

saahib ho, maar Daalo mujhe tum wagar-na kuch
juz aashiqii, gunaah naheeN hay ghulaam kaa
meer
juz/ghulaam/ka

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:54 pm

juz shahaadat nahiN is dehr meiN maTloob mujhe

mere qaatil ko bulaaou, maiN khaRaa hooN tanhaa.

(mere / tanhaa)

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:08 pm

fil badee, pesh hay
tanhaa chale ho dekh lo gum ho na jao tum
ab koee sang-e-meel milega na raah meiN
najma

ab/meiN

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Thu Apr 14, 2005 5:24 am

maiN jaantaa huN ki tu Ghair hai, magar yuNhii
kabhii kabhii mere dil meN Khayaal aataa hai

kabhii/hai

Post by **najma** » Thu Apr 14, 2005 8:54 am

kabhi kabhi to dharakta hay aise gil, goya
bohat qareeb se aawaaz terii aatii hay
najma

bohat/hay

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Thu Apr 14, 2005 12:35 pm

nahiiN ma'loom kis kis ka lahoo paanii huaa hogaa!
qayaamat hai sarashk_aalooda honaa terii mizgaaN kaa

qayaamat / kaa