Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sat Apr 23, 2005 2:31 am

najma wrote:tum hi mere mandi, tum hi merii pooja
tumhi devta ho -tumhii devta ho
-----------wao--------

gaanaa? ok! chalegaa!

lafz e "VAAO" nahiiN moHtaramah...alfaaz haiN:

tumhiiN / ho

HO paayii nahiiN zikr kii jurrat abhii naa_yaab
PHIR seena_kushaa tai'Gh, jigar_daar-e-Ghazal HAI

Hashmat Usmani

PHIR / HAI

Post by **najma** » Sat Apr 23, 2005 7:47 pm

raat kaantoN pe basar ho to ghazal hotii hay
shab-e-hijraaN ki sahar ho to ghazal hotii hay
najma
shab/hay

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:12 am

shab-e-Gham, ai mere Allaah! basar bhii hogii
raat hii raat rahegii k saHar bhii hogii

Seemaab Akbarabadi

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 3:51 am

hai bas_ki har ik unke ishaare meN nishaaN aur
karte haiN moHabbat to guzartaa hai gumaaN aur

Ghaalib

karte / aur

Post by **najma** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 11:31 am

karte rahay jo chaand sitaroN ki guftguu
wo aashnaa-e-azmat-e-insaaN na hosake
najma
wo/ho sake

Post by **najma** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:09 pm

fikr karte hi naheeN ehl-e-jahaaN jab fan ki
shikwa fan-kaar ka phirdost! bajaa hota hay
qaari ''azhar''

Post by **najma** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:10 pm

fikr karte hi naheeN ehl-e-jahaaN jab fan ki
shikwa fan-kaar ka phirdost! bajaa hota hay
qaari ''azhar''

shikwa/hay

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:28 pm

shikwa_sanj-e-rashk-e-ham digar na rahnaa chaahiye
meraa zaanuu moonis, aur aaiinaa teraa aashnaa

Ghaalib

meraa / aashnaa

Post by **najma** » Sun Apr 24, 2005 11:27 pm

aashnaa, jese aashna ke liye
yuuN lapaktee hay zeest, suu-e-ajal
najma
yuuN/ ajal

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:17 am

yuuN mukuraaye jaan sii kaliyoN meN paR gaii
yuuN lab_kushaa huye k gulistaaN banaa diyaa

AsGhar GoNDvii

yuuN / diyaa

Post by **najma** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:14 am

yuuN to keh lene ko keh lete haiN ham bhi NAJMA
jab koee khud meiN hunar ho, to ghazal hotii hay
najma

jab/hay

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:41 am

AUUUR baazaar se le aaye agar TooT gayaa
jaam-e-jam se miraa jaam-e-sifaal achchha hai

Mirza Ghaalib

JAAM / HAI

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 3:52 am

AB aksar chup_chup se rahe haiN, yuuN hii kabhuu lab khole haiN
pahle "Firaaq" ko dekhaa hotaa! ab to bahut kam bole haiN!!

Firaaq Gorakhpuri

pahle / haiN

Post by **najma** » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:00 pm

haiN wohii log jahaaNmeiN ach,chay
aate haiN jo kaam doosroN ke

aate/ke

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Tue Apr 26, 2005 1:44 am

ate aate aa hii jaatii hai moHabbat meN fahem
jisko tum kahte ho milnaa, ham use kahveN qazaa

Bi Naseeban

JISKO / QAZAA