manzar alam wrote:phool ki patti se cut sakta hai heere ka jigar
mard-e-naadaaN par kalaam-e-narm o naazuk be asar

Waah Waah Manzar Alam Saheb.. kya khoob sher hai. Shukriya. Magar Bhai jaan.. hum yahan "Khushboo" kii baat kar rahe hain....... kya hee achcha ho agar aap "Khushboo" lafz pe dher saare ashaar share karein.... Maza Aa Jaayega... !!

aapka apna

Munir Armaan[/b]
muneer armaan nasimi

Aaj Kitni Nikhar Gayi Khushboo
Seedhe Dil main Utar Gayi Khushboo

Mere armaan sab hoye uske
Mujhse mil ke Sanwar Gayi Khushboo

[munir armaan nasimi kii ghazal se.........]

munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:

manzar alam wrote:phool ki patti se cut sakta hai heere ka jigar
mard-e-naadaaN par kalaam-e-narm o naazuk be asar

Waah Waah Manzar Alam Saheb.. kya khoob sher hai. Shukriya. Magar Bhai jaan.. hum yahan "Khushboo" kii baat kar rahe hain....... kya hee achcha ho agar aap "Khushboo" lafz pe dher saare ashaar share karein.... Maza Aa Jaayega... !!

aapka apna

Munir Armaan[/b]
muneer armaan nasimi

iske liye maiN ma;zarat KHwaah hooN
janaab muniir armaan nasiimi saHeb!
aap ki GHazal ke ye ash'aar bahut hi KHoob haiN
nacheez ki daad qubuul kareN!
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