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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 4:55 am
by Hashmat Usmani
raah aasaan ho gaii hogii
jaan pahchaan ho gaii hogii


Saifuddin Saif
JAAN / HOGI

reh

Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 4:55 am
by Abdullah Nazir



reh gaii baat adhuri miri waqt-e-rukhsat

tum se kehdoongaa wo dobaarah mulaaqaat ke bad.


tum /bad


Nazir.


Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 5:06 am
by Hashmat Usmani
tum aa.Nkho.n se duur ho hu_ii niind aa.Nkho.n se duur
mere saathii Gam kii choT se huaa dil kaa shiishaa chuur


Azeez Kashmiri
MERE / CHUUR

Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 12:36 pm
by najma
mire dil ki dhaRkanoN se tira Gham hay aashkaara
keh yehii Gham-e-muqaddas, mire dil ka hay sahaara
najma

keh/ sahaara

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 1:28 am
by Hashmat Usmani
salaam Hamsheerah saaHiba,

kaii dinoN se lafz-e-"sahaara" par she'r na mila so Had darja majboori fil_badeeh yeh she'r kahnaa paRaa lol


sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa, agar terii moHabbat mil gaii hotii
kinaara mil gayaa hotaa, agar terii 'inaayat mil gaii hotii


Hashmat usmani
KINARA / HOTI

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:03 am
by najma
baat niklii, to baat chal niklii
baRh gaee baat, baatoN baatoN meiN
najma

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:10 am
by najma
kar gaee kaam pehlii fursat meiN
haey wo ik nazar, mohabbat-paash

najma

haey/mohabbat-paash

baRh

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:12 am
by Abdullah Nazir



baRhgaiee Hasrat-e-deedar tiri furqat meiN

Aur tuu hei kei ke miri dil-shani per qaayim.



Nazir.


Re: baRh

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:14 am
by najma
WEBMASTER wrote:


baRhgaiee Hasrat-e-deedar tiri furqat meiN

Aur tuu hei kei ke miri dil-shani per qaayim.



Nazir.


:o
she,r to haey/mohabbat-paash se shuru hona chahiye tha :o :P
:-)

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 2:25 am
by najma
subh hoti hay shaam hoti hay
umr yuunhii tamaam hotii hay

umr/ hay

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 4:26 am
by Hashmat Usmani
'umr jalvoN meN basar ho, ye zaruurii to nahiiN
har shab-e-Gham kii saHar ho, ye zaruurii to nahiiN


Khaamosh Dehlavii

Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 12:49 pm
by najma
sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein

lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein


lekin / mein


:shock:
kahaaN laa ke mara hay aap ne bhi sara j sahibaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! :o
ab aap hi is pe dijiye
koee she,r
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo
''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho :oops:
:P

Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 1:21 am
by Hashmat Usmani
najma wrote:
sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein
lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein


lekin / mein
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo ''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho :oops: :P
maiN ne bhii pichhli baat bahot jhak maarii thii...bil_aaKhior mujhe fil_badeeh she'r kah kar peechhaa chhuRaanaa paRaa thaa ](*,)

ab AAPKI BAARI hai, ham dil thaam ke baiThte haiN
:evil: :twisted: :lol:

Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 1:29 am
by najma
sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :evil:
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== :evil: tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma

Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 1:31 am
by Hashmat Usmani
najma wrote:sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :evil:
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== :evil: tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma
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