Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 12:17 am

gayaa hou jaise koii mere dil ko chootaa houaa

maiN rourahaa hooN akele meiN siskiyaaN lekar.

maiN / lekar

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 12:35 am

maiN kis se apni tabaahii ki daastaan kahooN
mujhe halaak kiya hay mire maseehaa nay
najma

mujhe/nay

Post by **najma** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:33 pm

miree zindagii bhi yaro! kya ajeeb zindagi hay
na qafas hi raas aaya, na chaman ka aab-o-danah
najma
nah/danah

Post by **najma** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:38 am

hamare shehr ki rasmeN, ajeeb rasmeN haiN
keh rah-zanoN ka yahaN koee eh,tisaab naheeN
bakhsh

keh/naheeN

Post by **najma** » Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:20 am

haiN log wohii jahaaN meiN achay

aatay haiN jo kam doosroN ke

aatay/kay

Post by **najma** » Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:23 pm

hay eh,timaam-e-giryah-o-maatam chaman chaman
rakhay haiN maqtaloN meiN janazay sajay huey
saGhar
rakhay/huey

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Fri Jul 01, 2005 3:38 am

tuu abhii rah_guzar meN hai, qaid-e-maqaam se guzar
Misr_o_Hijaaz se guzar, Paaras_o_Shaam se guzar

'allamah Iqbaal
MISR / GUZAR

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:19 pm

nafrat se pesh aa ke muHabbat se pesh aa

jaanaa nahiN hei mujhko tiri rehguzar se door.

( jaanaa / door )

Nazir.
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Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Sat Jul 02, 2005 12:23 pm

Bas zaraa choone nahiN paaye thay paimaane ko ham

dekhte hii reh gaye veeran maikhaane ko ham.

dekhte / ham

Nazir.

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Sun Jul 03, 2005 2:34 am

loag kyaa kehte heiN yeh fikr nahiN hei mujhko

yooN nah chup chup ke karo khooN mire armaanaoN kaa.

"alif"

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:11 am

yuN sajaa chaand k jhalkaa tire andaaz kaa rang
yuN fazaa mahkii k badlaa mire ham_raaz kaa rang

Faiz AHmad Faiz
YUN / RANG

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:23 pm

lagaao hei tiri khusboo-e-pairahan se mujhe

sukhan se koii gharaz hei nah anjuman se mujhe.

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:10 am

aataa hai kis andaaz se, Tuk! naaz to dekho!!
kis dhaj se qadam paRtaa hai, andaaz! to dekho!!

MusHafii
KIS / DEKHO

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Wed Jul 06, 2005 4:58 am

jhuum ke jab rindoN ne pilaa dii
ShaiKh ne chupke_chupke du'aa dii

Kaif Bhopali
SHAIKH / DEE

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Thu Jul 07, 2005 3:38 am

shukr hei aapko kuch mujh se shikaayat nah rahi

mere jazbaat bhii sharminda-e-auhaam nahiN.

mere / nahiN

Nazir.