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haiN aur bhee duniyaaN maiN sukhawar bohat ache
kehte haiN ke 'Ghalib' ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur

kehte / aur
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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kehte rahe ham apni muHabbat kii daastaaN

deewaanagi meiN ham ko zamaane kaa Dar nah thaa.


(deewaanagi / tha)


Nazir.

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khursheed sifat hei tou mire khaana-e-dil meiN

anvaar-e-muHabbat kii navaazish hei zaroori.


(anwaar / zaroori)


Nazir.

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Shab-e-firaaq guzaari hei maiN ne rou roukar

tuu aaftaab kii maanind chup gayaa thaa kahiN.


tuu / kahiN


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ho nah ho tujhko miraa shauq-e-deed bhaa nah sakaa

warnah kyaa aur sabab hugaa khafaa houne kaa.



(warnah / kaa )


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mujhko maAloom hei gulgasht ko niklouge magar

souchtaa hooN ke mulaaqaat ke din kyaa hugaa.


(souchtaa / hougaa)

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Dil-e-barbaad ne rakhkha nah kheeN ka mujhko

isko deewaanagiy-e-ishq kahuN yaa na kahooN.



( isko / kahooN )


Nazir.

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Saba Hum Sey Poochti Phir Rahi Hai
Chaman Ko Sajaaney Kay Dinn Aa Rahey Hain


Poet: Faiz Ahmed Faiz


Chaman/hain

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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maiN / aankheN

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MaiN tumko dikhaataa nahiN jalti houi aankheN

Kehti heiN yehi meri barasti houii aankheN.


kehti / aankheN


Nazir.

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Hei kab se qadam-bousiy-e-jaanaaN ki tamannaa

nazdeek magar mujhko wo aane nahiN dete.


(nazdeek / dete)


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nazdeek mire chaand agar aaye tou poochooN

kiyuN guzri houi shab ko tujhe neend nah aayi.


( kiyuN / aayi )


Nazir.

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zindagi jab bhi teri bazm mein laati hai humein
ye zameeN chaand se behtar nazar aati hai humein


ye/humeiN

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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hai bas k har ik unke ishaare meN nishaaN aur
karte haiN moHabbat to guzartaa hai gumaaN aur


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raat bhar sochataa rahaa tujh ko
zehn-o-dil mere raat bhar mehke


zehn-o-dil/mehke

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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dil touR ke khush houte hou yeh bhi hei koii baat?

kyaa tum ko abhi saath nibhaanaa nahiN aataa.


(kyaa / aataa)


Nazir,

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