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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:24 am
by najma
titee nazar k isharoN se khel saktaa hooN
jigar-furoz sharaaroN se khel sakta hooN
saGhar

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 2:58 pm
by najma
jaate huey kisi ne kahaa thaa, ye yaad hay
:najma: mileiNgay phir kabhi, jo zindagii rahii
najma

:grin: najma/rahii

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:12 pm
by najma
ham se aaya na gaya
un se bulaya na gaya

un/gaya

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:16 pm
by Mahtab Qadr
ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:20 pm
by najma
Mahtab Qadr wrote:ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya

un/gay

in do me se kisi lafz se shuru karna tha,aap ne =hay=seshurukiya hay.

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:29 pm
by Mahtab Qadr
sher to tafreeh e taba ke taur par likh dia tha magar aap chahti haiN to isi tarah chaliye aap ki baat par amal karte haiN :)

un se bhagaya na gaya
ham se jaaya na gaya.

"ham"

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:31 pm
by Abdullah Nazir



ham ko manzil tou kujaa koiee nishaaN tak nah milaa,

qaafilah aaj bhii hei garm-e-safar kyaa keeje.


qaafilah / keeje


Nazir.


Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:37 pm
by najma
qaflay manzil pe aaa k luT gaey
manzilon k faaslon se poochiye
manzil/ poochiye

manzil

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:05 pm
by Abdullah Nazir



manzil-e-shauq kii jaanib thay ravaaN ham lekin

raahbar jis ko samajhte thay wo rehzan niklaa.



raahbar / niklaa


Nazir.


Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:17 pm
by najma
rah-bar samajh liya hay tuje, gard-e-karawaaN!
chalte raheN gay ham bhi, jahaaN tak Ghubaar hay
najma

chalte/hay

"chalte"

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:34 pm
by Abdullah Nazir



chalte rahenge jaanib-e-mazil hameshah saath

dushwaar raastah hei tou rehne bhii deejiye.


( /dushwaar / deejiye )


Nazir.


Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:40 pm
by najma
baRe wucuuq se dunya fareb detii rahii
baRe khuloos se ham e,tibar karte rahay
shaukat wastii

baRe/ rahay

"baRe"

Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:54 pm
by Abdullah Nazir



baRe Haseen thay alfaaz us sitamgar ke

wafaa kaa naam liyaa aur be-wafaayii kii.


{wafaa / kii)


Nazir.


Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:57 pm
by najma
wafa ka nam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
ye ach,cha kaam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
najma

ye/ nayab

"ye"

Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:07 am
by Abdullah Nazir



yeh zindagi bhi Ajab imtihaaN hei dunyaa meiN

qareeb jiske maiN houtaa hooN, door houtaa hei.


"ye"


Nazir.