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chashm-e-makhmoor kaa jo zikr chalaa

tbaat pahouNchi sharaab khaane tak..


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[align=center]chashm-e-makhmoor kaa jo zikr chalaa

tbaat pahouNchi sharaab khaane tak..

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waah!


dil ke asfane nigahooN kee zabaaN tak pohnche
baat chal niklee hai ab dekh~eN kahaaN tak pohnche?
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jaan hatheli pe liye apni chala aaya hai
shama ke sath hi parwanah jalne aaya hai
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jaan hatheli pe liye apni chala aaya hai
shama ke sath hi parwanah jalne aaya hai

jawab!

koee baRh~e nah baRh~e ham to jaan dete haiN
ph~ir aesee chashm-e-tawajjah huee huee nah huee!

(Jigar Muraad aabadee)
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koee baRh~e nah baRh~e ham to jaan dete haiN
ph~ir aesee chashm-e-tawajjah huee huee nah huee!

(Jigar Muraad aabadee)


jawaab!


manSoor ke qamat se shanasa to huee khalq
ae Harf-e-sar-e-daar yeh aa'jaaz hai tera!

har chaak gareebaaN tire parcham se hai ham rang
har Halqah-e-zanjeer ham aawaz hai tera!
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baada-e-ulfat samajh kar zehr-e-gham peete rahe

jaam ik khaalee houaa tou doosraa jaam aagayaa.


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baada-e-ulfat samajh kar zehr-e-gham peete rahe

jaam ik khaalee houaa tou doosraa jaam aagayaa.

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.


sitam bh~ee ba'aZ^ jagah iltefaat hota hai
a'jeeb silsilah-e-waqe'aat hota hai

yeh Th~eek hai. to tasallee hoee GhareebooN kee
suna hai. zeher bh~ee aab-e-HaYaat hota hai.
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sar yuN jhukaa keh sajde meiN girnaa paRaa mujhe
aayaa nazar jahaaN bhee tiraa naqsh-e-paa mujhe
jeene de aur nah marne de Ahd-e-wafaa mujhe
tum ne yeh kis gunah kee dee hei sazaa mujhe
bbevajh kiyuN lagegi koiee bad'duAaa mujhe
le jaaye lene aaye tou sail-e-balaa mujhe
kis TarH bhaayegi tiri kaafir adaa mujhe
muddat houee keh housh nahiN hei zaraa mujhe
jo kuch bhee dil meiN aaye khushi se sunaa mujhe
amrit nahiN tou zehr kaa pyaalah pilaa mujhe
(note: pyaalah qadeem Tarz per hei warnah SaHeeH lafz payaalah hounaa chaahiye).
ulTaa gilah hei mujh se khud apne quSoor kaa
"yeh tou janaab pahle se maAloom thaa mujhe".


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sar yuN jhukaa keh sajde meiN girnaa paRaa mujhe
aayaa nazar jahaaN bhee tiraa naqsh-e-paa mujhe
jeene de aur nah marne de Ahd-e-wafaa mujhe
tum ne yeh kis gunah kee dee hei sazaa mujhe
bbevajh kiyuN lagegi koiee bad'duAaa mujhe
le jaaye lene aaye tou sail-e-balaa mujhe
kis TarH bhaayegi tiri kaafir adaa mujhe
muddat houee keh housh nahiN hei zaraa mujhe
jo kuch bhee dil meiN aaye khushi se sunaa mujhe
amrit nahiN tou zehr kaa pyaalah pilaa mujhe
(note: pyaalah qadeem Tarz per hei warnah SaHeeH lafz payaalah hounaa chaahiye).
ulTaa gilah hei mujh se khud apne quSoor kaa
"yeh tou janaab pahle se maAloom thaa mujhe".

kiya kehne!!

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.

jawab!

tumhare khat^ meN neya ek salaam kis ka tha
nah th~a raqeeb to aakhir woh naam kis ka th~a

woh qatl kar ke mujh~e har kisee se puch~te haiN
yeh kaam kis ne kiYa hai yeh kaam kis ka th~a

tamaam bazm jise sun ke reh gaee mushtaaq
kaho woh tazkirah-e-na taamaam kis ka th~a

har ek se kehte haiN kiya :DaaGh: be wafa nikla
yeh puch~e un se koee woh Ghulaam kis ka th~a.
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sar yuN jhukaa keh sajde meiN girnaa paRaa mujhe
aayaa nazar jahaaN bhee tiraa naqsh-e-paa mujhe
jeene de aur nah marne de Ahd-e-wafaa mujhe
tum ne yeh kis gunah kee dee hei sazaa mujhe
bbevajh kiyuN lagegi koiee bad'duAaa mujhe
le jaaye lene aaye tou sail-e-balaa mujhe
kis TarH bhaayegi tiri kaafir adaa mujhe
muddat houee keh housh nahiN hei zaraa mujhe
jo kuch bhee dil meiN aaye khushi se sunaa mujhe
amrit nahiN tou zehr kaa pyaalah pilaa mujhe
(note: pyaalah qadeem Tarz per hei warnah SaHeeH lafz payaalah hounaa chaahiye).
ulTaa gilah hei mujh se khud apne quSoor kaa
"yeh tou janaab pahle se maAloom thaa mujhe".


Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.



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Vahhh Vahh mohtaram, bahuuuut khuuub!!! :rose :rose

is haseen kalaam par merii daad aur mubaarak-baad qubool keejiYe! :-)
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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housh gaNwaaye rehnaa kab tak, apne meiN aanaa behtar hei

deewaanaoN se hamdardi ke saare raste band houee.


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housh gaNwaaye rehnaa kab tak, apne meiN aanaa behtar hei

deewaanaoN se hamdardi ke saare raste band houee.

Shaeir Abdullah Nazir

jawaab!

a'afiYat chaho to lazm hai ke gumnaam raho

ab to ik jurm hai is sheher meN shuhrat rakh~na!
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apnaa sab saakhtah pardaakhtah manzoor mujhe

is meiN tum ne bhee tou dil khoul ke shirkat kee hei.


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apnaa sab saakhtah pardaakhtah manzoor mujhe

is meiN tum ne bhee tou dil khoul ke shirkat kee hei.

Shaayer: Abdujllah Nazir.

jawab!

mujh~e shareek-e-baharaaN kiYa to Th~ehro bh~e

maiN apne khuN meN naha kar zara nikh~ar jaooN.

(E'shrat AfareeN)
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dil be-niyaz itnaa hei faSl-e-bahaar se

"kaaTooN maiN sarvo ko jo baRhe qadd-e-yaar se".


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