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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 11:49 am
by Ibn-e-siddique
vaah, shummu aap ne mera pasandeeda she'r pesh kiya hai
arz kiya hai:
nahin nahin ye khabar dushmanoN ne di hogi
wo aaye aa ke chale bhi gaye mile bhi nahin
wo / nahin
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 5:34 pm
by Shummu
wah sara je..!
khud ko sunte hein iss turhaaN jaise
waqt ki aakhri sadaa hein hum
waqt/hum
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 9:25 am
by fatimah
aslaam_u_alikam
main apney khawaab aankhon main liye phirtaa hun tariq
meraa chehraa bohat utraa hua hey kuch dinon sey
meraa/ sey
Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 4:52 pm
by Shummu
Laakh gham rahe mohabbat mein uthaane honge
Dard ke rishte baher haal nibhaane honge
--Riasat Ali Taj
dard/honge
Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 1:26 am
by Hashmat Usmani
dard
dard minnat kash-e-davaa na huaa
maiN na achchhaa huaa, buraa na huaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"maiN" ya lafz-e-"huaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 7:25 pm
by Hashmat Usmani
Saara ji, dusre misr'e ka pahla lafz "sar" hai na ki uskii murakkab soorat...aisa "Khel Ka Qaanoon" hai na, maiN kia karuuN! sorry!
hai
hai bas_ki har ik unke ishaare meN nishaaN aur
karte haiN moHabbat to guzartaa hai gumaaN aur?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"karte" ya lafz-e-"aur" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 8:48 am
by Shummu
Aur sone ke pinjre mai jinhaiN gizaa mil jaaye chaaNdi kee..
Umr bhar phir unhaiN aazaadiyaaN achchee nahee lagti.
-ahmad faraz
umr/lagti
Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:42 am
by Hashmat Usmani
nahiiN
nahiiN ma'loom kis kis kaa lahoo paanii huaa hogaa
qayaamat hai sarishk_aalooda honaa terii miZgaaN kaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"qayaamat" ya lafz-e-"kaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:52 am
by fatimah
sara_j wrote:qiyaamat hei balaa hei baam per aate hii chup jaanaa
kahaN DhoondooN tujhe aakhir maiN ab kis se patah poochooN
kahan / poochun
aslaam_u_alikam
kahan aa ker rukney the rastey kahan mor tha ussey bhool jaa
wo jo mil gayaa ussey yaad rakh jo nahin mila ussey bhool ja
wo/ja
Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:21 am
by Shummu
Kabhi Guncha, Kabhi Shola ,Kabhi Shabnam Kee tarah,
Log Milte Hain Badalte Huye Mausam Kee tarah
LOG/tarah
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:48 am
by Hashmat Usmani
tum
tum se be_jaa hai, mujhe apnii tabaahii kaa gila
is meN kuchh shaaiba-e-Khuubii-e-taqdeer bhii thaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"is" ya lafz-e-"thaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 11:08 am
by Shummu
is saadigee pe kaun na mar jaaye ae khudaa
laRte haiN aur haath meiN talvaar bhi nahiN
laRte/nahiN
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 1:39 pm
by Hashmat Usmani
merii
merii qismat meN Gham gar itnaa thaa
dil bhii, yaa Rabb! kaii diye hote?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"dil" ya lafz-e-"hote" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 5:34 am
by Ibn-e-siddique
kyuN gardish-e-mudaam se ghabraa na jaaye dil
insaan hooN pyaala-o-saaghar nahiN hooN maiN
insaan / maiN
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 1:02 pm
by Shummu
insaan aur dekhe ba_Ghai'r us ko maan le
ik Khauf kaa bashar ne Khudaa naam rakh diyaa
ik/diyaa