Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

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dil ke Khoon hone se ai jaan! na itna ghhabra
ek din tuu bhi Gham-e-yaar ki mehmaani hai--Aatish

ek/hai
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hai aik teer jismeN donoN chide pare haiN
vo din gaye keh apna dil se jigar juda thaa
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voh aur hoN ge tujh se milii jin ko zindagi
ham par to jab bhii aaNkh paRi aur mar gaye

~ ham / gaye ~
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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hum kahaN qismat aazmaane jaayeN
tuu hi jab Khanjar_aazmaa na hua--Ghalib

tuu/hua
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Post by Mayank »

juda

KahuuN Kaise kee tuu sar-e-raah mujh se judaa thaa
jigar e laKht laKht meiN naam tera khudaa thaa..


- Manish Bansal 'Mayank'
hoti Shiddat teri vafaaooN meiN
maaNg lete tujhe duaaooN meiN
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tuu kahiiN bhii rahe sar par tire ilzaam to hai
tire haathoN kii lakeeroN meiN mira naam to hai

~ tire / hai ~
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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Post by Mayank »

tere

lab pe tere iqraar-e-mohabbat sher Gazal kaa lagataa hai
sharm se cheharaa laal gulaabii phuul kamal kaa lagataa hai. Anonymous


[chehreaa]
hoti Shiddat teri vafaaooN meiN
maaNg lete tujhe duaaooN meiN
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hai buskey her aak unkey isherey main nasha aor
kertey hain mahobt tu guzerta hey guman aor.
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Aur to sab naama.e aamaal se jaane gaye
Dil ke daaghoN se tere ushaaq pehchaane gaye !


PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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Post by Daanish »

dil se abas hai, gumaan-e-ranjish-e-Khaatir
Khaak meiN ushaaq ki Ghubaar nahiN hai--Ghalib

'Khaak'/'hai'
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Post by hassan_bashir »

aur kyaa ahd-e-vafaa hote haiN
log milate haiN judaa hote haiN

~ log / haiN ~
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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Post by ummassad »

hain aour bhi duniya main sukunwar bahout acchey
kahtey hain kh galib ka hey andaz.e.bayan aour.
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kahate hai.n mujhase ishq kaa afasaanaa chaahiye
rusavaaii ho gaii tumhe.n sharmaanaa chaahiye
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Post by Daanish »

chaliye is silisilay ko aage baRhaate haiN. 'zillat' se koi shayr zehn meiN nahiN hai...'se' se mumkin nahiN! so 'fasaane' se aage baRhte haiN:

'fasaana-e-shab-e-Gham unko ik kahaani thhi
kuchh ai'tebaar kiya, kuchh na ai'tebaar kiya'
--DaaGh

kuchh/kiya
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Post by ummassad »

kuchh baat hey ki hesti mittey nahin hamari
sadiyoun raha hey dushmen dour.e.zaman hamara

sadyoun ;hamara
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